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i know thats a flaw, i noticed that flaw while writing it but couldnt find a short and appropriate way for them to introduce them selves without completly KILLIN the plot. but u are a keen reader

bin: been stocker: stalker otherwise not bad... keep it up

reviving a dead story 5 months after its posting cuz i like it... for those of you who might have been waitin for it, i started a story on avian and lost it... wasnt taht good anyways, but it was bout his younger days also... in the story avian was like a f2p who had done all he could and tehre was nothing left for him... well IMAMEMBERNOW! =) thx for readin

ok, ill do u a favor and let a dead story stay that way DEAD. so maybe some time yull see a prequil on Avian... who knows. Well... the choice is yours (the reader) you can let an old story die or keep it alive... thx for your support. youve been great readers.

i felt crazy to when i said that... but in the back of my mind i kinda believed that there would be at least 15 people who read these... guess not... if i can get 10 people wanting another, then i will write it. Please tell me the one person you want it to be about. thanks

im glad yall liked it! i love feedback. If you have any questions about what seems to be confusing you, by all means ask. I will be happy to explain confusing items and possibly edit the story if there seems to be a problem. well thanks for taking the time to read. as for a part two, im still considering it. Maybe i could do a prequil on just one character... thats what would be most likely actually i like that idea! its your time to decide! every body who would like a prequil, post the character you would like it to be about, it will most likely be only one character. so please only vote once. great! im looking forward to this if i do not recieve at least 15 votes from different people i wont do the story... so if u want another one, tell your freinds and vote.

really short... cant coment much on the topic. Try typing your story in microsoft word or something, then when you get a substancial amount paste it here. 4 sentences is really really short, this is the story forum... expand on your opening paragraph and submit your entry when you get a chapter or so.

IT IS FINISHED the final chapters are up and i am waiting for feedback! the story speaks for itself.

sounds like The Last Samuri people fighting with the ancient arts of old against tecnology. Not the first time this has been done before, but it has potential if used properly... will be continuing to read

ok chapter 11 up, always enjoy feedback, no story forum is complete with out a comment from KChuges (hint hint) *cough comment will ya cough cough*

Wow, I have fans :lol: i think the proper term would be "fan"

OK!! chapter 11 is up and the whole story is typed! i demand feedback :twisted: no seriously, all i have to do is paste the last chapters in. I will be puting the last in one at a time as to build suspense. I tried to make this last chapter super suspenseful (is that a word?) by adding a little twist at the end. well... wont post chapter 12 until i get at least a little feedback... im not happy unless I know somone read it. thanks guys!

definitely The Tale of a P-Mod its freaking sweet! http://forum.tip.it/viewtopic.php?t=522393 i have it saved to my comp cuz its the best rs story i have ever read... kchuges, if ur reading this, will u marry me... that was a joke, im serious... really, dont take that literally, ur story is awesome... dont flame me....

CHAPTER 10 UP! rest coming soon Again, im enjoying all the feedback, zonorhc wrote: hey. Im gratefull for the feedback, i will use this all to help improve my writing. I do not in the least bit dissagree with anything you have said. I am just wondering... have u even read my story? the reason i ask, correct me if im wrong, is because i have been puting detail and description in my story. I think so that is. Its not like im just saying: avian bought fish. He went to wildy. He hit a 15 and a 13 on william. william ate a fish. william shot an arrow. avian teled cuz hes a noob. i am puttin quite a bit of detail in my story, its just, honestly guys, if i wrote an entire 700 page "return of the king" story and posted it here on the internet... would any of you read it? When i want long stories, i hit a library, when i want short storyies, i hit the library of zammorak. well thx again guys, chapter 11 will be posted soon

wow, by simply changing the title, i got an overflow of posts (my evil plan worked) well thanks for the coments guys, the idea behind the short chapters was to describe one person a chapter, so although the chapters are short, ive been releasing them 3 at a time instead of one. this may be my opinion, but the beauty of writing about runescape is that there is already a setting in place. I can write short chapters and simply say something like "varrock square" and the readers know what im talking about, in a longer book, take C.S lewis's lion witch and wardrobe, lewis had to spend pages and pages describing this winter world in a wardrobe. or describing Mr. Tumus's hut, I can simply say "edgville bank" and everybody already has a mental picture of it, with out me having to describe it, making the story much shorter and to the point, so you dont have to read as much description, and more action. chapter 10 will be out as soon as i type it... the story is finished and sittin on my desk waiting to be typed.