October 11, 200619 yr It was a very fine day in Asgarnia. The trees were blowing in the breeze. The sounds of the gracious swans in the moat of the White Knights Castle were protecting their younglings. The White Knights were at the Rising Sun discussing the latest winner of the Gnomeball Championships over a nice glass of Asgarnian Ale. The day was going great when the sounds of chaos and cannonfire blasted through the atmosphere. Smoke rose through the city gates of Falador and the civilians ran through the streets with fear. BOOM! BOOM! The Black Knights smashed through the city gates and mauled all of the guards. The White Knights guarded their posts and suited up their finest weapons to demoliosh the Black Knights. "Let's finish this battle that was proclaimed to happen!" yelled Sir Amik Varze as a battlecry. Clank! Slash! Crunch! The sounds of combat roared through the air. Smoke rose from the castle and the other buildings. The battle didn't end for 3 days. After the Black Knights retreated after suffering heavy losses. "VICTORY IS SO SWEET!!!" proclaimed Sir Amik Varze. "...but the war isn't over. Keep up patrols and make sure the city is guarded at ALL TIMES!" commanded Sir Vyvin. Until the next battle, Asgarnia is safe. Until then...... TO BE CONTINUED.................... :ohnoes: ...ever since that faithful day on Karjama that I fought the evil chicken, things have never been the same...
October 11, 200619 yr Author YOU MAY NOW POST! ...ever since that faithful day on Karjama that I fought the evil chicken, things have never been the same...
October 12, 200619 yr Not bad, I would have made it a little longer though. With a quill or reading spectacles, visit the Varrok Library today.Become one of the first members of the Order of Honor!http://forum.tip.it/viewtopic.php?t=572462http://s8.invisionfree.com/The_Order_of_Honor/
October 12, 200619 yr I guess you were going for short and sweet. It is always nice to see legends and stories in the Varrock Library that are not fifty scrolls long. Although not all short narratives are bad the lack of a real plot and a firm conclusion took away from the tale.
October 12, 200619 yr Author sry about that guys. I had to go to band practice and i really didnt have the time to make it really long. But thanks for all of the comments. They are well appreciated. (sry about the grammar,i was in a hurry) ...ever since that faithful day on Karjama that I fought the evil chicken, things have never been the same...
October 27, 200619 yr Good begining, I like the way you describe the cannonfire and such. Proud Legionairre of the 10th Legion of Kandarin.Search for "The 10th Legion of Kandarin" on RSOF to join a small, friendly clan!270 Quest Points and countingRemember - In the gene pool, there is no life guard. :PYou're not getting my point. If you had an IQ above room temperature you would.
November 3, 200619 yr Author The next chapter is underway..... Stay tuned.......... ...ever since that faithful day on Karjama that I fought the evil chicken, things have never been the same...
November 4, 200619 yr Keep it all in the same topic, don't have a new topic every chapter Proud Legionairre of the 10th Legion of Kandarin.Search for "The 10th Legion of Kandarin" on RSOF to join a small, friendly clan!270 Quest Points and countingRemember - In the gene pool, there is no life guard. :PYou're not getting my point. If you had an IQ above room temperature you would.
November 4, 200619 yr Never heard of a story that's what.... 5 sentences long? Keep it on the same topic. :shame: By popular demand, this signature is back- however I currently do not have a blog up at the moment and if I did I wouldn't update it. Sorry, the sig links to nowhere :( .
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