They thought they could torture me. They thought they could torture me like how I am going to torture them. Those despicable bastards. Those who made my existence a misery, those who are going to pay for the crime that cannot be undone.

 

 

 

Her pearl white flesh twinkled in the glistening moonlight. Her jet black hair camouflaged against the night though her hazel eyes shone with eccentric vision. She moved gracefully on the footwalk, taking care in not to be heard or seen. Victim one slowed a little, taking a short glance behind her. Was she already noticed? Her mind played through a memory like a tape recorder. No matter what, she could not erase the images of

 

herself being torn as the gang pushed her around, shouting crude comments. Their taunts stuck in her mind. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅEdith the weirdo!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

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Hiya GoingUnder. How are you doing? I LOOOVED!!! this story!! If you want the rest of my comments they're at the bottom of that link... :thumbsup: So same thing I LOVE IT!!!!! :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: =D>

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Verrrrrrry nice GU. I still say you shoulda made the gravestone Teh Angel of Grief (Nightwish cover lol) :P

hehe thanks issy! and thanks for tellnig me what a clause was ! #-o btw where it says

Those despicable silly persons

 

and

 

Come with me wonderful person

 

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