post comments for improvements on body

 

 

 

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this was what i am going for a weapon hidden behind my back but i need sugestions to make the ground look less dodgy, anything?

Has potential. :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Make his arms thicker...they're way too thin for the breadth of his chest right now.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Of course..that's the beauty of cartooning....proportion means moot.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good luck.

the scimmy is weird

 

 

 

and the hand the other arm is weird

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the chest is too big

its pretty good so far if i were u dont put it on a black or dark background cuz it will be very hard to see...

has potential!

bump

ice like the bg and mage :)

Just that the upper body is too largely built for the arms... Oh and what text is that, used for the 'Here ranger ranger'... Sorry, I'm a bit stupid ;) I need that font! gah!

its from runesape using printscreen button and paint bucket to remove stuff around it

oh... lol, can't you just get that with a font? :?

maybe but u cant the black shading although u cant see it on this pic

Move the mage and ranger further back, they look small.

ok ill try