okay! Well Im writing a story.. hope you all like the quick preview! Ill have chapter 1 up tomorrow morning. Also feel free to flame or give constructive critsim.. Exept for the fact I have dyslexiy, so please dont rant about spelling...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

INTRO

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Once In a land.. Named Glienor.. There existed two Great Human kingdoms. One was Kanodria. The other was Glienor. For Centuries these nations existed in peace, Along with the other creatures, The elves, and the Gnomes..

 

 

 

One day the Kanodrians Attacked the Glienorian city of Priffdianiss. There, The Kanodriands were about to win the war. A last alliance between all the nations was able to defeat The Kandonians In this chaotic battle. Tayuya, Daughter of Prifandas (the king of men) killed the leader of the Kanodrians.

 

 

 

But the bloodline was quickly severed. After Tayuya had a child, The Kanodrians returned, and the Baby was presumed lost. Soon the Kandorians rulled the entire known land of Glienor.

 

 

 

And soon, History turned into myth. Myth turned into legend. And legends are easily forgottenÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ

Love the intro, I can't wait for chapter one :mrgreen:

Very good, can't wait for the next one!

Good story idea but personally I wouldn't have copied the Lord of the Rings.

Hmmm most good ideas are stolen from something that is ultimately less successful...aiming a bit high don't you think?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway it was good and am waiting for the next chapter.

CHAPTER I: The hunting party

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Takka jumped over the tree branch. He then ran towards the top of the hill. Ieko was not far behind. The two raced up the hill to find Chesi crouching down looking into the trees. Takka, looked at Ieko. Takka looked out towards the trees to see someone dart past a bush. Takka knew it was just Titeyo.

 

 

 

Ieko was about 5ft tall. He had long brown hair, and brown eyes. Gifted with a long sword, short sword, of even a two-handed sword, Ieko could handle it.

 

 

 

Chesi was only 2 feet tall. But that wasnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t hard to believe since she was a gnome. She was gifted with the Short bow, Longbow, and Daggers (since sheÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s a gnome daggers are about as big as her armÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ). Chesi had a smart-alecky voice, but was also the reasonable one.

 

 

 

Takka could see Titeyo running up to him. Titeyo was out of breath from attempting to catch deer. He was about as tall as Ieko, only he was part elf, so he was taller. He always wore a red baseball hat, ever since he found it.

 

 

 

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Well its a bit short but it is fairly good, even if a bit haphazardly thrown together.

CHAPTER II: Spying

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅKeep going you barf-heads! My granny can run faster than you even could!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ