November 6, 200619 yr Neither good, not evil Only resolve The symbols Lost meaning Inverted pentagram Crucifix Both only there No feeling Life and death Good and evil God and devil Meaning nothing Instinct remains To banish the other Good to defeat evil Evil to defeat good Standing Intolerable energies Surging foward A cataclysm An epic Untold Not to win Only to kill Conflict Ying and yang Balance Remain Always equal Neither or both Joined at birth Locked in life Peace to end Only to die Not existing Outside spirit Mind to end End to life Life to darkness Darkness to death Death To an end The final end The only end The end http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts.
November 6, 200619 yr You really do try too hard, Archie... :lol: Anyway um. I don't like it. Too short lines, they're just pretty cliche phrases, nothing special.
November 6, 200619 yr Author That was the point, they are just phrases, not a story, not a poem, linked only by the power of your mind... http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts.
November 8, 200619 yr pretty nice. Issy, I thought you would have picked up on the fact that he *only* picked cliche phrases. Pm me if you need anything proof-read, I may not be very good, but I am always willing to help.A Seal Clubber is me!A Oxygenarin is me!6*9=42
November 8, 200619 yr Author Thanks dragon. Don't be hard on Issy though. http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts.
November 9, 200619 yr Very nice. I understood it well. :D. Good read. We need more of those. Does anyone happen to know death_siren? She stole a green mask from me, and I think I found my way into her ignore list. If you know anything, please, don't hesitate to give me a pm.
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