Nevermind, I'll just post it when its done, and I guess I really should develop my own styles...

If you ask me, start all over again, and try to be more creative with the line patterns in the background.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Might seem harsh, but it's just my opinion you know.

woow, i am sorry but thats not even close. You really need to work on it a bit more

Nope, I accept any critisism thats constructive, so I'll take your construcive criticism and start over. But just keep in mind its my first.

Sorry for duplicate

i hate those kind of sigs, just make a ez c4d render, zoom out real far, stick it in a black background and add some brushes. thats all you need to do, but you should find your own style ;)

Well it's very basic...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Try not to copy other peoples styles, develop your own.