December 9, 200619 yr OK, well, this is my first runescape story. I have a few things to say. 1. Nope, no character bios, this story has a lot of ppl from my friends list on it, but i plan to create a sequel so when i post the sequel you can character bio. 2. This is about a war the Zamorakians are waging against all Saradominists. 3. No title, i originally titled it Battle for Rs, but that just seemed really stupid... :oops: if anyone has a title idea, post it. 4. This is only chapters 1-4, i am in the process of making 5-8, which i will update into here, but only if people like the first 4 chapters. 5. I Apologize if the grammar and spelling arent great, but i think that you guys can figure it out. Chapter 1 Four Zamorakian warriors surveyed the battlefield. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅThose Whippers are causing us much trouble,ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâà i r tink tht a11 ppl shud use g00d gr@m3r since g00d gr@m3r is ftw.
December 12, 200619 yr your moving too fast, its not bad, but slow down, and describe the scene, dialouge isn't everything. Remember, deatil is your friend. How 'bout "Zamarokian Onslaught" Pm me if you need anything proof-read, I may not be very good, but I am always willing to help.A Seal Clubber is me!A Oxygenarin is me!6*9=42
December 13, 200619 yr Author actually, the next part in the series is Saradominists fighting back... i r tink tht a11 ppl shud use g00d gr@m3r since g00d gr@m3r is ftw.
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