Toad Posted October 11, 2004 Share Posted October 11, 2004 all ms paint apart from border and text rate away oh and i know the light is cheap Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Hippop Posted October 11, 2004 Share Posted October 11, 2004 5/10 because the sword looks weird :? but the rest is ok i guess but it doesnt show much a sword on a rock... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vladmoney Posted October 11, 2004 Share Posted October 11, 2004 5/10, shading is good, but the sword and light look really werid Visit my DeviantArt Page at http://vladmoney.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nailiali Posted October 11, 2004 Share Posted October 11, 2004 Ya the shading is great but the lighting is a bit off and the sword looks weird. Try different sword proportions and maybe make the handle a bit less pointy. ~NAIL~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColAvanor Posted October 11, 2004 Share Posted October 11, 2004 before wasting anymore time on shading, concentrate on the linework. That doesn't really look like a sword to me. :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nailiali Posted October 11, 2004 Share Posted October 11, 2004 before wasting anymore time on shading, concentrate on the linework. That doesn't really look like a sword to me. :? I agree. The outlines of the background and charactors is the base of the sig. Shading just like a coat over ur sig to make it look better but without good line work, shading is worth near nothing. ~NAIL~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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