ForsakenMage Posted October 13, 2004 Share Posted October 13, 2004 This is a poem and a rant rolled into one I wrote a few days ago. I had another poem, but because the language is rather heavy (even with the creative license it's still too much lol), I decided not to post that one and post this one instead. Enjoy! The Horrible Hottie With each breath I take More toxins rush into my body I cough and gag horrendously For goodness sake Put out that horrible hottie! The smell that fills the air And brands my clothes quite happily Make me cought and sneeze again Isn't there fresh air to spare Away from that horrible hottie? The doctor tells me I am ill And asks if I've been around the hottie I cough and struggle to speak No, I hate the hottie and her evil bill That I now pay for trying to breathe Guess who, or what, is that horrible hottie... :shock: Adventurer's Log || YouTube || Facebook || Tip.it Times Work || Wanna Join the Editorial Panel?Maxed Out 01 October 2012 PDT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
w00ds Posted October 13, 2004 Share Posted October 13, 2004 ciggies!??!? nice poem btw Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
djscoobsta Posted October 13, 2004 Share Posted October 13, 2004 ciggies!??!? nice poem btw cigerettes, cigars 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloaked_Shadow Posted October 13, 2004 Share Posted October 13, 2004 pie? ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Templar Posted October 15, 2004 Share Posted October 15, 2004 pie? LMAO Nice poem! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoyalFlush Posted October 16, 2004 Share Posted October 16, 2004 I wondered why I was strangely aroused.... :P Nice winding of the words. You placed them just right. Very entertaining ;) If it isn't in your veins, you'll never know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbl3z Posted October 22, 2004 Share Posted October 22, 2004 great manipulation of imagary and excellent usage of poetic devices. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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