i need some tips on the grass as i dont know how to do well without tiling :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

gona add rain animation on later with photoshop

The sun looks out of place as if it's too big. Personally i like the background, but the sun should be smaller and shaded.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good though =]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

10x better than i could do

The sun looks out of place as if it's too big. Personally i like the background, but the sun should be smaller and shaded.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good though =]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

10x better than i could do

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

as you know it is the night so that is a moon (just a full moon..i need to add craters then)

 

 

 

and it is shaded :wall:

The shading around the moon is very strange, it should have

 

 

 

the same shape as the moon itself.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You tried to make the refelction of the moon in the water, thats a good thing but that needs some work also.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The grass could be more detailed, unless you go for the cartoony style.

 

 

 

(there are some grass tutorials, you should search for those at Google.)

heh, love the text :XD:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

if thats the moon make it silver not yellow o0

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

looks like you need to neaten up your lines a bit, dont have any pixels next to each other, all new lines shouldnt directly touch, only on the corners, it looks alot better that way.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the moon is a bit too wide....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

to to sure what to say about the grass, however it may be an idea to dither it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the tree isnt too bad, but one of the roots go out too long

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the water looks too blue, water is clear, also lower the sat, to do that bring the colour picker into the greys

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

PJB21

heh, love the text :XD:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

if thats the moon make it silver not yellow o0

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

looks like you need to neaten up your lines a bit, dont have any pixels next to each other, all new lines shouldnt directly touch, only on the corners, it looks alot better that way.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the moon is a bit too wide....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

to to sure what to say about the grass, however it may be an idea to dither it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the tree isnt too bad, but one of the roots go out too long

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the water looks too blue, water is clear, also lower the sat, to do that bring the colour picker into the greys

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

PJB21

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

after tomorrow i will start working on it :wink:

 

 

 

(got to finish off 99attack)

Make it a half moon. Looks better i think.

Hmm here are a few suggestions/observations I have:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The moon looks very stretched out.. Horizontally. Either make it more circular or make it a half moon as B_50_2 suggested.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The tree looks a bit strange to me :? I'm pretty sure it's those awkward branches on top. Maybe try adding more branches (some starting farther down on the tree too) and reaching to the sky.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- As for the reflection of the moon in the water.. I don't think the reflection would would be so "perfect" if you get what I mean. Here's an example I found on google: http://www.absolutad.com/gallery/reflection-water.jpg. You don't have to make it exactly like that, but at least make it seem like the reflection is in water. So add ripples or some aspect that hints that the reflection is in moving water, so it shouldn't be a perfect circle.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The picture itself seems kind of empty. I really like the idea you have started here but try adding a few more minor details. Even if it's just reeds on the side of the pond, or light mountains in the background, or grey clouds in the sky. The smallest details can really make the picture a win or lose :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Many people have already commented on the grass. I'm definitely not a pixel expert so as woopidoo2 suggested, try looking for tutorials on google or something :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Best of luck! Hoped these helped!