Hi, I thought that I should give the Varrock Library a go to see if I have any talent as an author. So I bring you this poem. "Debt in the middle Ages" or something like that, I've never been good at titles :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Twas 7 in the morning

 

 

 

When he rose up from his bed

 

 

 

Heard some people angrily calling

 

 

 

He knew he was for dead

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He dashed out from under the sheets

 

 

 

And thought quickly for his escape

 

 

 

He thought he could just hide from them

 

 

 

But alas, it was too late

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

There lay an open window

 

 

 

Right up against the wall

 

 

 

He quickly leaped through it

 

 

 

And then began to fall

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Right down into the ground

 

 

 

Smack! He landed and searched around

 

 

 

He knew if he could just blend in

 

 

 

He never would be found

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A wagon full of haystacks

 

 

 

How perfect of a plan

 

 

 

If anyone could pull this off

 

 

 

He knew he was the man

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He leapt into the wagon

 

 

 

And slid between some hay

 

 

 

Then the wagon owner set off

 

 

 

To finally start off the day

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Having barely just woke up

 

 

 

He felt rather drowsy

 

 

 

And thought of his misdeeds

 

 

 

This made him feel quite lousy

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

For he had gained peoples trust

 

 

 

Only to let them down

 

 

 

And the reward for this mischievous deed

 

 

 

Was only gold in the pound

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He wished he could give it back

 

 

 

Every cent and all

 

 

 

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That was really quite good. Flowed pretty well and the message was good, interesting story behind it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Only down side was the rythem, it sort of broke down in places, though the rest of the poem made up for it.

I thought it was very good, it made me laugh. I'm glad you chose to rhyme it. :

i like it

I liked it very much and after studying poetry since i came into 6th form i have been pretty bored with it but i liked this one so well done.

Hi, I thought that I should give the Varrock Library a go to see if I have any talent as an author. So I bring you this poem. "Debt in the middle Ages" or something like that, I've never been good at titles :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(Poem was here, but it was too long to quote)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hope I didn't bore you too much :(

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Dude!...Dude! I loved it! =D> Bravo! You didn't bore me, the rythm and flow were really great together, and you were very creative! Kudos to you!

Nice poem :D It's fun to see a humourous one now and again. A few other people have already touched on this, but the only major problems were with the flow/rhythm in certain areas. It could do with some tweaking, but other than that, great job :)

Nice, refreshing poem, but I didn't find it funny (not that that matters)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

=D> keep it up!

Thanks everyone, It wasn't really meant to be humerous though lol :lol:

 

 

 

I think Dr Seuss would be happy .....hehe, with the rhymes and that :P