January 8, 200719 yr Hm I'm not sure. I only read the first one and the language use is fantastic. However for me it's too abstract and the rhythm is weak. I liked all the questions though.
January 8, 200719 yr Author Hm I'm not sure. I only read the first one and the language use is fantastic. However for me it's too abstract and the rhythm is weak. I liked all the questions though. It's not meant to have a rythm to be honest. If I write with rythm I prefer to use rhymes as well. But, I suppose how abstract you find it depends on who you are.
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