Rate it please

bump

the sun and the ferms look weird... the rays arent square, lol... its more lined, as with the ferns...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

anyway, enlarge the character... the ratio between the rock and the guy isnt right... the guy should be ALOT taller then the rock... like 3 - 4 times the height...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

hope ive helped :P

I've seen a lot better "firsts", but you did okay.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Try adding shading and maybe have your 50+ miner mining something like coal? I'm not sure tin is very... erm... :S?

 

 

 

Try to have your black outlines more cleaned up and small.

The sun (if that's what it is) looks very out of shape and you've drawn the lines going too far out...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The tree looks quite poor, but it's just a background object so doesn't have any real importance...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The character needs a lot of work... He's very small and thin, he should be facing the rock, and his not really holding the picaxe...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The linework for the background (clouds/land/etc...) is a bit too think, and so looks rough...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The seagulls/birds should be further apart...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The foreground is very plain, and same with the background, other then the very top of the sig (perspective shouldn't really go like that)...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The ratio's are quite disoriented...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Absolutely no shading...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Other then that, it's ok I think... Hope that helped a bit 8)

it looks freehand to me

dude we are like the same skill level for backgrounds lol

yea its definately free hand...

my sigs are free hand.. nothing stoping me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i'd rate it 4/10... maybe less... but good try on u'r first atempt.

not bad guy kinda thin

i used paint for this... i reformatted my comp and adobe photoshop was gona ( i downloaded it) and yes i did the free trial thing... but it ran out... so if i had a better program i would have done better and thnx for the tips you guys.. ill use em on my next pixel siggy

Shade.

since your mining me iron ill make u a pixel sig instead of cash :D

lol... id rather have the cash