uNL337 Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 Rate it please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Guest Dreamlove Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 the sun and the ferms look weird... the rays arent square, lol... its more lined, as with the ferns... anyway, enlarge the character... the ratio between the rock and the guy isnt right... the guy should be ALOT taller then the rock... like 3 - 4 times the height... hope ive helped :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Punkage Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 I've seen a lot better "firsts", but you did okay. Try adding shading and maybe have your 50+ miner mining something like coal? I'm not sure tin is very... erm... :S? Try to have your black outlines more cleaned up and small. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
youmakemesik Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 The sun (if that's what it is) looks very out of shape and you've drawn the lines going too far out... The tree looks quite poor, but it's just a background object so doesn't have any real importance... The character needs a lot of work... He's very small and thin, he should be facing the rock, and his not really holding the picaxe... The linework for the background (clouds/land/etc...) is a bit too think, and so looks rough... The seagulls/birds should be further apart... The foreground is very plain, and same with the background, other then the very top of the sig (perspective shouldn't really go like that)... The ratio's are quite disoriented... Absolutely no shading... Other then that, it's ok I think... Hope that helped a bit 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trumpeteir Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 it looks freehand to me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest 1_Hit_Quit Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 dude we are like the same skill level for backgrounds lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Volture Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 yea its definately free hand... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMLMatus Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 my sigs are free hand.. nothing stoping me. i'd rate it 4/10... maybe less... but good try on u'r first atempt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ic3dragon Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 not bad guy kinda thin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uNL337 Posted October 24, 2004 Author Share Posted October 24, 2004 i used paint for this... i reformatted my comp and adobe photoshop was gona ( i downloaded it) and yes i did the free trial thing... but it ran out... so if i had a better program i would have done better and thnx for the tips you guys.. ill use em on my next pixel siggy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Molishist Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 Shade. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goalybobjr Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 since your mining me iron ill make u a pixel sig instead of cash :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uNL337 Posted October 24, 2004 Author Share Posted October 24, 2004 lol... id rather have the cash Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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