Emo Poetry...

[xdeadxpoetic]

Here are some excerpts from some poems i wrote... note that this is not 1 poem, it is different parts of many poems, so a lot of it wouldnt make sense if you combined it into one poem. i jus started writing poetry recently and i want to kno what you guys think of it:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I can drown in the deep sea of your eyes...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Here I am beside myself (again)

 

 

 

Standing in the pouring rain

 

 

 

Thinking of how your love once poured down

 

 

 

And covered every inch of my body

 

 

 

Where has that rain gone? (so far away)

 

 

 

There you are again...

 

 

 

Raining down on the replacement of me

 

 

 

Oh how I have grown to hate him so

 

 

 

I want your rain again (beautiful rain)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ill play romeo

 

 

 

Youll be juliet

 

 

 

And as this tragedy unfolds

 

 

 

So will the love we share

 

 

 

This gun is loaded

 

 

 

One bullet

 

 

 

Straight through you

 

 

 

And as you fall to the ground

 

 

 

I hope you fall just as hard

 

 

 

As I fell for you.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My love for you falls from my eyes

 

 

 

Slowly drips onto the floor...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I will always love you

 

 

 

Cross my heart

 

 

 

And hope to die

 

 

 

So stab here

 

 

 

X marks the spot

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Fall asleep to the piercing melody

 

 

 

Of me screaming out your name

 

 

 

And my desperate cries for you

 

 

 

Listen to the song of this broken heart

 

 

 

This song is neverending

 

 

 

This heart is forever broken (for you)

 

 

 

I will love you always and forever

 

 

 

('Til death sets me free)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The moonlight shines through the window

 

 

 

Spreading light on the darkest shadows of this heart

 

 

 

Reflecting on the shattered pieces of what used to be

 

 

 

The one thing that you cherished the most

 

 

 

Now this heart has wilted and fallen to the ground

 

 

 

A black rose laden with blood

 

 

 

And if you could only see it now

 

 

 

In the light of the full moon

 

 

 

In the screaming quiet and stillness of the night

 

 

 

You would see all that is left is my love for you

 

 

 

Scattered amongst the remnants of this heart,

 

 

 

These memories of you cannot be forgotten

 

 

 

This love cannot be destroyed

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Everything Beautiful Comes With Time... (And you're oh so beautiful)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

...what do u guys think of it?

[Ryan]

Here I am beside myself again

 

 

 

IÃÆÃâÃââÃÆââââ¬Ã¡ÃâìÃÆââââ¬Ã¾Ãââm torn apart by words that you have said

 

 

 

and all in all, I know weÃÆÃâÃââÃÆââââ¬Ã¡ÃâìÃÆââââ¬Ã¾Ãââre falling apart

 

 

 

Where did you run to so far away

 

 

 

And here we are to sing you a song

 

 

 

And there you are asleep against the windowpane

 

 

 

Just like always

 

 

 

You said you like to hear the rain sometimes

 

 

 

and all I can do is tell you the truth

 

 

 

Oh my eyes will tell you the same

 

 

 

And here we are to sing you a song

 

 

 

And there you are asleep again

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Well you stole lyrics from a finch song. It's written pretty much the exact same not to mention the beginning line and others. The rest is probably copied too, I'm just too lazy to check.

[Freesy]

Erm...Nice??? I suppose it is rather nice, but work on blending it more = )

[S0S]

helooooooo lawsuit.