master_zim Posted November 1, 2004 Share Posted November 1, 2004 Well like I said it is my first. I am open for suggestions and criticism. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_PoseidoN_ Posted November 1, 2004 Share Posted November 1, 2004 http://forum.tip.it/viewtopic.php?t=100097 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
master_zim Posted November 1, 2004 Author Share Posted November 1, 2004 Whoops... I thought it looked pretty good though. :cry: Sorry, mods close please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordBlank Posted November 2, 2004 Share Posted November 2, 2004 i dont like it. It does not flow. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Sith Posted November 2, 2004 Share Posted November 2, 2004 Closed per author's request. Keep practicing - "practice makes perfect!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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