thedepressedsquirrel Posted February 5, 2007 Share Posted February 5, 2007 Edit: fixed - text is default color now Hey guys, on my website, i made my best online friend Kayla an admin. I sent a letter to her. This is the letter, and i wanted to know if i should add anything or take anything out. Here t is: DDbra, I would love to promote you to a higher rank. I now promote you from; Strokemaster, to, ADMIN You can now log into the admin group. You can now do anything you want to the website. You can now, be an admin . Over the past 1 year that i have been playing runescape, you have always told me to follow my dreams and to never give up. I did follow my dreams. One of my dreams was to have our own website. And one of my dreams was to become the best in runescape. Although you have told me to try my hardest at things i want to do in life, i am sorry to say this but, I am quiting runescape. I know that you were the one DDbra, who never gave up on finishing your dreams. You got 99 magics not because you thought it woud be fun, or not because you were bored. You did it because you had the courage and strength to do that. You DDbra, were the one person that i looked up to in runesape. You were my friend. And you always will be . ~~Brain. Brain is my acount name on my website and her name is DDbra. So, is it good? Please reply. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
____ Posted February 5, 2007 Share Posted February 5, 2007 DDbra, I would love to promote you to a higher rank. I now promote you from; Strokemaster, to, ADMIN You can now log into the admin group. You can now do anything you want to the website. You can now, be an admin . Over the past 1 year that i have been playing runescape, you have always told me to follow my dreams and to never give up. I did follow my dreams. One of my dreams was to have our own website. And one of my dreams was to become the best in runescape. Although you have told me to try my hardest at things i want to do in life, i am sorry to say this but, I am quiting runescape. I know that you were the one DDbra, who never gave up on finishing your dreams. You got 99 magics not because you thought it woud be fun, or not because you were bored. You did it because you had the courage and strength to do that. You DDbra, were the one person that i looked up to in runesape. You were my friend. And you always will be . ~~Brain. Fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turnip Posted February 5, 2007 Share Posted February 5, 2007 I can't tell if this is a joke or not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
knives669 Posted February 5, 2007 Share Posted February 5, 2007 I, too, am anxious to look at your body. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Errdoth Posted February 5, 2007 Share Posted February 5, 2007 Um, well, sorta sounds like a speech. Try short and simple like: "Congratulations, you have now been promote to Administrator. All administrator privlages are accompanied by this position. if you have any more questions, please, don't hesitate to contact me. Thank you, Brain" No offense, but it sorta sounds like some sort of love not "You have alwasy told me to follow my dreams and are my best friend..." Last.fm Signature Overlays Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paul_wilson Posted February 5, 2007 Share Posted February 5, 2007 Overdone actually. First and only pixel thinger I made. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thedepressedsquirrel Posted February 5, 2007 Author Share Posted February 5, 2007 What do you mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
knives669 Posted February 5, 2007 Share Posted February 5, 2007 You are disgusting. Almost as disgusting as this thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paul_wilson Posted February 5, 2007 Share Posted February 5, 2007 What do you mean? Do you want to promote him to admin or take him to prom? First and only pixel thinger I made. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thedepressedsquirrel Posted February 5, 2007 Author Share Posted February 5, 2007 I made him an admin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paul_wilson Posted February 5, 2007 Share Posted February 5, 2007 Drop the freakin' commas! You overuse them so much and space out the message. After 1 sentence there is like 10 lines to the next one. Plus, it is too wordy. First and only pixel thinger I made. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheTallestDwarf Posted February 5, 2007 Share Posted February 5, 2007 Well, you act as if you know the person in real life and you're dying of cancer. I would have sent them a letter saying they're promoted, and thanking them for the friendship or something to that affect. Fun with paint. Drink night cough medicine, take pills for sleeping, or just start playing with your Pokeman balls! In your Gameboy SP that is. =P~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thedepressedsquirrel Posted February 5, 2007 Author Share Posted February 5, 2007 I, too, am anxious to look at your body. Wuh? -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
knives669 Posted February 5, 2007 Share Posted February 5, 2007 It's a bit overdone... Just shorten it up a bit. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thedepressedsquirrel Posted February 5, 2007 Author Share Posted February 5, 2007 It's a bit overdone... Just shorten it up a bit. ^_^ I made it a ton shorter!!!!! Here it is: DDbra, I would love to promote you to a higher rank. I now promote you from; Strokemaster, to, ADMIN You can now log into the admin group. You can now do anything you want to the website. You can now, be an admin ^_^ . Over the past 1 year that i have been playing runescape, you were my friend. And you always will be ^_^ . ~~Brain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheTallestDwarf Posted February 5, 2007 Share Posted February 5, 2007 Hey guys, on my website, i made my best online friend Kayla an admin. I sent a letter to her. I made him an admin D-b-whaa?! EDIT: You forgot to tell him/her you're quitting. Fun with paint. Drink night cough medicine, take pills for sleeping, or just start playing with your Pokeman balls! In your Gameboy SP that is. =P~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paul_wilson Posted February 5, 2007 Share Posted February 5, 2007 Ah, young love. First and only pixel thinger I made. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
____ Posted February 5, 2007 Share Posted February 5, 2007 Just add the chick to the admin user group, make a topic saying 'hi' in the admin section and be done with it. Suprises work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paul_wilson Posted February 5, 2007 Share Posted February 5, 2007 Nice letter First and only pixel thinger I made. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
knives669 Posted February 5, 2007 Share Posted February 5, 2007 What do you mean? Do you want to promote him to admin or take him to prom? Internets, serious business. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paul_wilson Posted February 5, 2007 Share Posted February 5, 2007 It sounds like you think hes a god, of some sort. :shock: Just say something along the lines "your a nice guy, and i think you should be an admin of my site :D" First and only pixel thinger I made. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astralinre Posted February 5, 2007 Share Posted February 5, 2007 Poor D3M0NX. He probably has no idea he's being mocked. :P "In so far as I am Man I am the chief of creatures. In so far as I am a man I am the chief of sinners." - G.K. Chesterton Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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