Astralinre Posted November 17, 2004 Share Posted November 17, 2004 http://www.deviantart.com/view/12374880/ Comments/Criticism on here or on deviantart are appreciated. This was definitely fun to make. The original Bryce render was intended to be a desert, which ended up looking like an ocean. So I ended up recolorizing and changing up several parts, then sent the render over to PS, did some brushing, and voila. I hope you like it. :P //Astra "In so far as I am Man I am the chief of creatures. In so far as I am a man I am the chief of sinners." - G.K. Chesterton Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mhc_leader Posted November 17, 2004 Share Posted November 17, 2004 u got great skill, but i dont like the pic much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
forsaken Posted November 17, 2004 Share Posted November 17, 2004 Hm, the misty top bit (you know, the foam at the top of the waves) doesn't merge well enough with the lower parts of the waves, at certain areas you can tell its been added. :P Try saving the pic as jpg with max quality as well, gif looks ugly sometimes. Ah, and the lightning looks like its out of perspective with the actual picture. :P . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quer_Skulll Posted November 17, 2004 Share Posted November 17, 2004 tone down the blur/smudge a bit on top of the waves it doesnt merge, and like theguy above said the lightning is out of perspectve and doesnt look like lightning in some points the waves at sea text with the sign is cool and the water to gj Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2pac Posted November 17, 2004 Share Posted November 17, 2004 it's pretty good, the only thing i don't like is the lightning, doesn't really fit in.. gj go cowboys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astralinre Posted November 17, 2004 Author Share Posted November 17, 2004 Thanks for the comments. I'm afraid my computer messed up before I could save as a psd, so I can't go back and edit anything. :( I see what you mean about the lightning and the waves, though. I might just get the original render back and try again. "In so far as I am Man I am the chief of creatures. In so far as I am a man I am the chief of sinners." - G.K. Chesterton Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vladmoney Posted November 17, 2004 Share Posted November 17, 2004 the waves look bad, they should be across the whole sea Visit my DeviantArt Page at http://vladmoney.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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