Dream: a poem i wrote :)

When the world comes to a rest

And there is no sign of light

You lie in bed and close your eyes

As you dissolve into the night

You lay there calm and quiet

As if everything were dead

Then your mind starts to stir

And you are lifted from your bed

You have entered your dream

And your secrets spill out

It makes you want to scream

And it tempts you to shout

You enter a world of fantasy

Between sorcery and danger

You meet magnificent creatures

And become part of the adventure

Then you are returned to your bed

Just as you spot a golden beam

The sunlight reaches your eyes,

And you think, it was just a dream.

~somaster ..... did you like it? please review

i liked it dude, keep it up :!:

what's with the avatar?

why whats wrong with my avatar...i think pirates are cexy.

i am a girl by the way. in case you were wondering :wink:

You enter a world of fantasy

Between sorcery and danger

You meet magnificent creatures

And become part of the adventure

u screwed up abit in this verse and the first verse as u did not follow the ryhme sequence, apart from that keep on writing

yes im aware of that...it was on purpose

but thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

good poem 10/10