xSyntheticxNightmaresx Posted December 23, 2005 Share Posted December 23, 2005 Unforgiven If I told you sorry, would you trust me again? If I finally surrendered, would this war end? If I fought for your side, would you let me in? If I failed to go on, would you push aside my sins? I admitted I was wrong, then I poured out my heart So much time has passed, yet we're still so torn apart The things I've done were horrid, the pain I feel is white But I'll show you someone different, if you forgive me tonight... If I gave you one more chance, would it end up this way? If I opened up my heart, would you be here to stay? If I lit one more burning flame, would it die like before? If I do forgive you, would I be deceived once more? You risked everything for me, but in the end you lied It's so hard to believe in those tears of regret you cried Only when I stop to wish that you were somehow here Down we lay, let go today, for our end is near... Yeah now that you read it why don't you people diss me out for sucking at writing things...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Howie101 Posted December 23, 2005 Share Posted December 23, 2005 eets preety good i have to write 25 poems in french,...i dont speak french but its an assignment...and these poems make me seem more of an emo that i am cuz all i know in french is family members and love and stoof Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xSyntheticxNightmaresx Posted December 24, 2005 Author Share Posted December 24, 2005 ok... oh well then good luck to you with that :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncmd Posted December 25, 2005 Share Posted December 25, 2005 That is really good. Its nice seeing something different on these forums for once. Pm me if you need anything proof-read, I may not be very good, but I am always willing to help.A Seal Clubber is me!A Oxygenarin is me!6*9=42 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xrhinox Posted December 26, 2005 Share Posted December 26, 2005 Really awesome poem. Sounds like a girl bs'd you or something? or is it just a poem for fun? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xSyntheticxNightmaresx Posted December 27, 2005 Author Share Posted December 27, 2005 Well, first of all I AM a girl :shock: and I sort of wrote this for another person... :oops: But then again I sort of also did it for fun and I don't know lolzzz.......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryderj716 Posted December 27, 2005 Share Posted December 27, 2005 I enjoyed it, seriously that was NOT pathetic in a bad poem sort if way, only in the sad sort of way, lol. 1690 total and unranked strength. Headed for 1800.I like the irony (no wait, paradoxicality) in how there's a spelling error in this sig. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xSyntheticxNightmaresx Posted December 28, 2005 Author Share Posted December 28, 2005 Hehe, you got it then. That's why it's PATHETIC :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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