A Tragedy of the Keyblade War arc finished, check for detail

Hi Y'all, this is the origional version of Tale of the Lover's Ghosts. I wrote this listening to Simple and Clean, and watching the first secret scene of KHII

A dry dust swirled around the motionless being that sat there, barely moving to breath, and settled on him, until he wiped it off the object before his eyes. He never thought that all that was good would come to this, all that was evil, and all that was neutral, all that he cherished would allow this to happen.

He mused on his past, his, what used to be, heart, and he despaired in his sorry and misery. She... she... she... her... heart... so beautiful...

The armor sat infront of him, the helmet foremost and on a keyblade that looked similar to Oblivion, and it rusted, except for the helmet. That held a rose on its wings, and it did not ever move.

The wars had gone on for years, hearts of darkness never slept while the good were peaceful, and fighting, greater than any that came before, began again. All over the worlds, their hearts, and kingdom hearts. The chain of memories that bound him to his spot began to unwind, allowing him sweet relief as he remembered.

THEY had conquered his planet, the world of metal, though now he wished it never was, and they were a kinder conquerer than the others before. And she was with them. She... her... Luxia, named the Sunset dalliance, was assigned to lead his group, the neutral group. He was the previous leader, and took no offense to her supplanting him. And they fell in love, just like the stories they both read. Together they fought rogue heartless for the five years of their togetherness, and married for four of them. No one could deny that they, with all their skills, were mismatched.

Then one day, she was no longer their. She sent a note, making sure it reached him after it was too late. She took her and his child, a girl, named for water, and left everything else that she could get by without. And he cried his heart out, everything except that which belonged to those two he loved more than life.

Then came the order to move out, the new conquerers were not as kind or as merciful as the ones that ruled, and they demanded all that could fight to fight. It was the final, period, battle, on a desert world, whose heart had died because of those who were motivated by greed and envy. And she was there too.

He sat, in the midst of his comrades, and polished Silver [bleep]e, the keyblade that always went to the next warrior in his family line. No matter what the distance was, when the fighter descended in his and his ancestors line became a true and honorable warrior, Silver [bleep]e came to that warrior. It was one of the longest keyblades in existance, and it tapered to a point, with two [bleep]es acting like the teeth of a key sticking up.

And tomorrow is the last battle, they would end it there, they said, they would win, they said. They lie, he said, and he said he would be right, that he, Kami of the silver glimmer, would see that many would die, with no absolute winner.

Nice! =D>

Its sounds good already : :thumbsup:

Told ya I didn't leave yet. :P Today though.

Loved it. The flow is brilliant along with what is going on in the secret movie II. However, now that millions of us throughout the world saw the extended secret ending, we know the true fate of the three warriors and who they are: Sora, Riku, and some random enraged guy :lol: . Kinda makes me wish that movie didn't exist yet. :x

However, this was before you saw the movie I assume, and it's brilliant, there is no true denial to that. :D

Thank you gentlemen, I conclude it today. Also, I rewrote this when the new one came out, Sephy

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And she was there, he could feel her heart. Kingdom Hearts, that gave all a feeling, a feeling of love, pulled him to her. Yet he fought to stay away, and then, they could no longer be separate. She met him on the battlefield, fighting in their own little circle, dying to end all that separated them, yet knowing that they could no longer live together. So finally, he, him, the one who loved her, tore off his helm and screamed to her.

"I love you! You know this, yet we fight! Can we not disappear? Can we not love each other as we once did, with her, our child?"

"You know she is safe, with my mother in Radiant Garden, and she will be under Ansem the wise, why must you bring her up? You know that we can no longer be together, the oaths that bind us are too great. Nothing in this world will be as simple and clean as our love, not our child, whose first sentence was 'where's dad?' and not Kingdom Hearts!"

He lurched forward and grabbed her, hugging her to him in what he would have died to call a everlasting embrace. But she cast him off her, the one who loved her, and grabbed his keyblade, Silver [bleep]e, and impaled herself with it. Her helmet, which she had taken off, fell at his feet, his own bare head wet with tears. So she died, and her heart, the part of her who loved him, went to Kingdom Hearts.

Why? Why? Why? WHy? WHy? WHy? WHY?! WHY?! WHY?!

Why...

He sat there in a daze. She was dead, the one he loved. His wife, and his daughter was unreachable to someone like him. No one to love, everyone to hate. His comrades for not being there to stop her. Her comrades, for not getting in their fight, the commanders for forcing them to fight. Kingdom hearts, for taking her heart and that he hated most of all, and he wished that he could find her heart again.

And with that final thought, his heart shattered fully, and he ceased being, in any sense, good. Killing hundreds of fighting keyblade weilders is no easy task, but, he was Kami of the Silver Glimmer, Silver [bleep]e and Setting Sun, the keyblade of his beloved, were his, to destroy all that dared make him hate them.

And he was one living figure in a sea of Keyblades, no longer fully useable. Life to him was a torment.

And some few years past. His daughter fled the rape of Radiant Garden, and the heart of the one who used to be called Kami sensed it. But he had forgotten all, and especially, what it was like to have a true heart. Three figures approached. All in the cursed armor of the ones who called themselves "good" And he chased them. And he was the soul of one dead, a chaser of a thought, and that thought forever eluded him. But he knew two things. Love was now forever beyond him, and that he was merely the soul of one who lived, a chaser to seek reality.

Fin!

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how y'all like it?

Short, But good :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

as a KH fan i'd like to say:

very nice story. I quite liked it. :thumbsup:

and sephiroth_king, im gunna take a shot at thinking the third is roxas. :-k

as a KH fan i'd like to say:

 

very nice story. I quite liked it. :thumbsup:

 

 

 

and sephiroth_king, im gunna take a shot at thinking the third is roxas. :-k

I wish he was, but Roxas has cools [bleep]y hair, this guy has long hair. I dunno, guess we have to wait...*Turns on PS2*............*Shut's it off*

Must...have...KH2 Final Mix...

Loved the story. Muahahahahah! I have no clue how long I'll be here today, but it's cruddy here, so we might not go back till tomorrow! Yay! Ahem...I mean.... O:)

It's too short. It's really good, but doesn't have enough plot.

it was good.... i liked it.. :D

as a KH fan i'd like to say:

 

very nice story. I quite liked it. :thumbsup:

 

 

 

and sephiroth_king, im gunna take a shot at thinking the third is roxas. :-k

 

 

 

I wish he was, but Roxas has cools [bleep]y hair, this guy has long hair. I dunno, guess we have to wait...*Turns on PS2*............*Shut's it off*

 

 

 

Must...have...KH2 Final Mix...

 

 

 

Loved the story. Muahahahahah! I have no clue how long I'll be here today, but it's cruddy here, so we might not go back till tomorrow! Yay! Ahem...I mean.... O:)

i hate the fact the asian based areas get it and we dont i so wanted to play KH:CoM in 3d form but noooo.... (spec cause you play as riku)

liked it buy not enough plot.

4/5 though =D>

as a KH fan i'd like to say:

 

very nice story. I quite liked it. :thumbsup:

 

 

 

and sephiroth_king, im gunna take a shot at thinking the third is roxas. :-k

 

 

 

I wish he was, but Roxas has cools [bleep]y hair, this guy has long hair. I dunno, guess we have to wait...*Turns on PS2*............*Shut's it off*

 

 

 

Must...have...KH2 Final Mix...

 

 

 

Loved the story. Muahahahahah! I have no clue how long I'll be here today, but it's cruddy here, so we might not go back till tomorrow! Yay! Ahem...I mean.... O:)

 

 

 

i hate the fact the asian based areas get it and we dont i so wanted to play KH:CoM in 3d form but noooo.... (spec cause you play as riku)

Well, first, I live in america dark aura, and second, the US IS [supposed to be] getting it, if not fall then next year. Can't wait. I already saw the extended secret ending, awesome, it's really cool. But sora dies, great, there goes our comic relief.

Hey guys, suddenly inspired again (don't know when to quit...)

Note!!! this is not a sequel! I just decided to put it in the same post!

The battle was over. He didn't care who won, just so he is undisturbed.

Sora, Riku and Kairi read the letter. "Well, what do you think this means? Riku? Kairi?"

Riku sighed. "It means we'll miss more school... but I'm up for it if you are, Sora!"

Kairi looked at the letter and the problem presented. "I think this will be a terrible adventure, and I don't know why."

"Aw, come on Kairi! It'll be fun, and besides, I'll protect you!" Sora replied confidently.

"Protect her?! You can barely save her!" Riku playfully pushed Sora down and they raced around, full of energy for a new adventure.

Soon, Goofy and Donald appeared, with their gummy ship.

"Come on guys! Time's a wasting!" Donald's normal frenzied yelling soon gathered the trio. "The King's sent us personally, were going to the nearest place to Kingdom hearts, The Graveyard of Hearts! We'll meet his majesty there! Come On!"

Sora, ran up to the ship. "Oh, come on, your really happy to see us!"

Goofy slapped Sora on the back as a greeting. "Well, Donald's jus a little wound up, but its very important we take you three to the King!"

They arrived and the King waved them over, motioning them to be silent. "Look." King mickey whispered. "The door to Kingdom hearts is beginning to open, and someone is opening it. Recognize him?"

The world was dark, and a glimmer of light shown down on a helmeted man who was focusing great power in his arms and gave the appearance of opening a stiff sliding door. Soon, as the crack grew, a black figure, obviously a heartless, and another armored figure appeared, doing the exact same motions.

"I think he is like Xenohort, but more powerful than he ever was... that's why I waited for you guys to come before acting. We can't let him open up Kingdom Heart's door all the way! Ansem the Wise once lent me a book, and reading it, I realized that Kingdom Hearts grants anyone power, reflecting the last truly powerful heart. How the author found out, I'll never know, but, its time to make sure that a dark, strong heart does not open it!"

The six companions ran down toward the figure, which soon stopped its task and fixed three different pairs of baleful eyes on the charging friends.

"LEAVE ME BE!!!! RAAAARRGH!" The Middle lifted up his arms and two keyblades appeared in his hands. One was a silverish [bleep]e with a blood red tip, the red extending several inches into the blade, the other was multi-colored, with an end that looked like a setting sun.

The figure that looked like heartless summoned a great zwiehandler and wielded it one hand. The other figure forced energy in his arms to form a ball and chain, which it flourished with a great ease.

Sora had Ultima Weapon and jumped at the middle character, with Riku wielding the Way to Dawn Keyblade running to attack also. Kairi and Goofy attacked the Heartless with shield and keyblade, with Donald and Mixkey attacking the last left being with their own signature attacks.

More tomorrow, I hope.

Cool, it really pulls me into interest when people write about this stuff...Mainly because it's a fan fic that gives awesome feel to what happens next, and mainly because IT'S KH!!!11!!1 Lol. But you write it with good feeling, and it just seems like t would fit in so very well...

Of course, keep writing. Now. I mean it. :evil:

The three fought the six heroes with greater ferocity than any of them had felt before. But, something troubled the center warrior... that smell...

It was a very similar smell to his beloved, but its own. Perplexed, he began to seek their maiming and capture, so as to understand this spell. First Donald, then Mickey, Riku and Goofy, until only Sora and Kairi still could fight him. He laughed, his other two forms were destroyed, but so what? They were not his true self!

In a sudden move he kicked Sora down and was about to claim another heart with Silver [bleep]e, when Kairi, attempting to protect Sora, Dived in front of this fatal blow. He stopped it, mere millimeters from the skin over Kairi's heart. He smelled the familiar smell again, maddeningly close, yet too different to be his beloved smell alone. Then he realized something, she smelled a little like himself, and a little of the boy as well...

His long dormant heart, long unused, suddenly reared itself in the heart of Kami, of the Silver Glimmer, and he screamed! Why was Kingdom Hearts taunting him!!!!

"Graaaagghhh! Why do you continue to torture me!? Kingdom Hearts! I'll destroy it!!!"

Releasing his power from the Keyblades into the sky, where the door was almost open. A sudden burst of energy came back at him, shattering his chest armor and his beloveds helmet which he now wore. And he fell down and his heart was released. A small rain of hearts, all of them having their own stories and battles fought and loves lost, joined it. And one heart floated down to meet it and they disappeared.

Sora was unconscious, Riku was concentrating on getting up, Mickey and his companions were also blacked out, only Kairi still stood to see this tender moment.

A ghost appeared on either side of her, a man and a woman, and they tried to speak, but no words came. So, the two took Kairi between them in a hug, but they could not touch her. The two did not show any emotion, no communication could be understood between them, so they disappeared.

Kairi helped Riku up and propped him next to Sora, she dragged Mickey, Donald and Goofy to them as well.

"I saw what happened, Kairi, who were those people?"

"I don't know... I thought they were just here to hurt us... I was too scared to do anything... when they passed through me... ugh..." Kairi began to shiver a little, but soon brought herself back under control. "What do you think they were doing?"

"Trying to tell YOU something."

"Me? Why not to all of us?"

"Because, I can smell people by the darkness, or lack there of, in their souls, and he smelled a little like you."

"You can't be serious..."

"I am, and I notice you have a couple new keyblades with you."

Kairi hadn't been paying attention, two keyblades were now attached to her, and the hip, and at the back.

They returned home, everyone shaken up but mostly whole.

Sora, newly awakened, soon had questions. "Hey, Kairi, how'd you get those Keyblades, I was too, uh, unconscious to see."

"You mean sleepy while I single handedly defeat our foe?"

"Uh, heh heh... But seriously, the guy was wielding them, you sure their not evil?"

"They could be on the outside, but inside, I think, they once belonged to a good heart."

Riku, however, was now suspicious, something didn't make sense... why would the two keyblades, which impressed themselves as being called Silver [bleep]e and Setting Sun, choose her?

Alright everyone, this finishes my "Tragedy of the Keyblade war arc" Now, I need some fresh inspiration!

So, basically, you suggest what happens, what sort of villains, where it takes place...

Basically, anything that doesn't contradict KH in any MAJOR way. (I.e. Kairi is never gonna fall for Riku! [don't pm me saying that they should again! you know who you are!!!!!! :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: ])

Have fun!