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Comes and Goes

 

She feels that tickle in her mind,

It comes and goes again.

Grasping at those words she can't find,

It comes and goes again.

 

You can see the emotion in her eyes,

It comes and goes again.

Don't be fooled by beauty, she is wise,

It comes and goes again.

 

Calling within, she needs a sign,

It comes and goes again.

Show me your thoughts, I'll make them mine,

It comes and goes again.

 

Her thoughts come together in time,

It comes and goes again.

Now her world has become a rhyme,

It comes and goes again.

 

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I made this poem one evening while talking to a friend about the songs she writes.

I mentioned I also like to write, but poetry (as I can't play any instrument very well),

rather than the songs she writes. She said we should write a song together, and

I agreed. She then mentioned that she always had trouble thinking of the words,

and that she wanted me to write her a poem. So I said I'd write a quick one based

on her difficulty to write the songs. It was pretty fun to write, though there isn't

really any specifically insightful meaning to the poem. Just a good time.

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Does "good time" usually involve Whiskey and other things? :P

 

I thought it was pretty good. :)

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Whiskey may or may not be involved. This particular time it wasn't involved :lol:

 

Thanks for the comments.

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