sephiroth_king

PART ONE: Enter the Tramua Prologue The roaring sirens pierced the night, cars pulling out of the way...The medical truck finally came to a halt. The man was being treated by those around him, other people in light blue coats, trying to stop the flow of blood from his chest. After the attempt of murder, the man survived. He opened his eyes, adjusting to the strange light above him, and his heart was beating at an abnormal pace. His body jerked; the doors of the truck flew open, and the stretcher was pulled out of the truck. Nurses and doctors around him, all each with a fearful look on their faces, some nurses even crying at the sight of the man. Hiss heart began to beat harder, harder, faster, faster...The doctors knew there wasn't much time. "What happened?" One of the doctors came to the side of the stretcher. His face was full of anger at the look of the bleeding body. His hair was long, his brown hair sleek and curly at the bottom. The stretcher moved, faster and faster, until the doors of the hospital slid open. "He was shot seven times; he shouldn't be alive." The older looking man said. "Three times in his abdominal area, twice on his right arm...And the other two lunged near the heart. Luckly, they got stuck within the rib cage, but the pain in him is still great." "How did this happen?" The brown haired doctor said. "I don't know, Harry!" The older doctor said. "But we have to rush him into the ER, fast!" "Vitals dropping, and fast! Heart rate going faster!" A young nurse with blonde hair and green eyes said. Tears were rolling down her eyes, as she pushed the stretcher quickly. "Come on!" The older man came into range of the sliding doors, and the stretcher finally came to a halt. "We have to operate immedatley! Jessica, take the anestetics and inject him with it, now!" The blonde girl, now recognized as Jessica, quickly injected the serum into the man's sanitized wrist. Tears were still rolling down her rosy cheeks. "Don't worry, you'll be okay..." She quickly assured the man. "Don't worry...We'll save you! We have to!" "Don't worry, pal," the man looked at Harry, whom had a scalpel in hand, "those bullets won't be in you for long." Aster began to drift, the room becoming a blur. Nothing but darkness. Nothing but the past. Nothing but memories... Chapter 1: Faith "Doctor Vince! Stop spacing!" Aster jerked his head up. "Naturally, always sleeping when it benifits you." He yawned, and he rubbed his eyes, the light now adjusting to his sensitive cornea, and saw a Nurse---Nurse Thompsan, one of the best in the hospital, stood in front of him. Exasperated, she threw a file onto his desk. "What's this?" Aster took the file from the desk. As He opened it, Nurse Thompsan sighed. "Last night, Doctor, there was a shooting. Seven bullets, into the abdomen, arms, and two in the heart. The man luckily survived, and he is resting now." Aster looked at the gruesome file; the bloody ground were the man was shot had probably stained it, and the neighborhood awakened. This was on the news this morning... Aster thought to himself, as he closed the file. "This is old news. So what? Does he need further treatment?" "He needs to be checked for anymore bullet fragements, any poison that could have been injected in the bullets needs to be pumped out. And our director wants this to be your first surgical patient." "Me?" Aster stood up. "But I just got out of my internship! I didn't even know at first that people could inject poison into bullets! How would we locate it?" Nurse Thompsan, quick on her feet, slapped him, and Aster fell onto his chair. "It won't be hard. It's not two-thousand and seven anymore, it's two thousand and eighteen; and you know as well as I do that technology can treat these things. Just come to the briefing later, and then we'll do the surgery." She quickly walked out of the office, and Aster, still in pain from the torriential power of the slap, rubbed his face. "Oh, and Doctor?" Aster turned his head, shielding his face for anymore abuse. "Why do doctors exist? Just remember the answer." She walked out, the autmoatic doors sliding open, and closing very quickly. **************** Cool. That's only a fragment, lemme write more later. There is bound to be spelling errors and stuff, so if you found them, tell me :P I have a bit of a headache. Also, tell me what you think . I'll write more tommorow, since I have no school, anyway. Hope you enjoyed! Have a good one!

For a long time now, I've been interested in surgery. The Tramua center games were very good simulations, and I got the name from the first and Second one's. Through hard thoughts and many trials in school, I've now created my latest story: Under the Knife. Everything is devised from my school, as I've been developing characters and a plot...This post will primarily be theTABLE OF CONTENTS, and a news section srictly devoted to when the new chapters will come out. Also, there will be a Medical Terms section, and I hope it will help with any of the medical related terms that you need help on. NEWS SECTION 3/15: Time for a new story. I'm excited, how 'bout you? I really hope you enjoy, as this is my first time writing off fantasy...But it's future oriented...You know, you decide. Fiction, yes...Fantasy? Yes? No? Well, anyway, let's start off with a prologue, and maybe a couple of chapters. Just check out the TABLE OF CONTENTS (I'll refer to this as TOC, OK?). TABLE OF CONTENTS PART 1: Enter the Tramua Prologue Chapter 1: Faith Chapter 2: Truth Chapter 3: Don't be Afraid

Sephiroth, KH1 and KH2. Athough it took me one try to beat him in both games, it still was long. Ganon was extremely easy, so don't think you are too good (Although all Zelda endings are easy, yet fun...).

Ern...Blue did a lot like, how the PS3 is superior. I may do that sometimes, but I'm entitled to my opinion, and all I said is that the PS3 is always in stock, I could go there and buy one now. Wii's, well, you can't. And everything I say is always based on facts, wereas Blue...Not so much, especially when she uses Wikipedia :wink: It's like when you didn't answer me when I asked why IGN was bad, because you have no reason, you just know it's very good at rating games and their info is accurate. Right? Wrong? If I'm wrong, then tell me why you don't like IGN, either that, or don't say it's a bad site.

Very good story! Very enjoyable! Your endings are always interesting and enjoyable, like going back to reality! 9/10 from me. What's the writing contest? HMMMMMMMMMMMMMM??? :D

I hope so...But don't get your hopes up. Maybe the battle, but my fantasy/adventure imagination has run to an obstacle, and it's hard to think of more. So in school, I wrote a SERIOUS story of future day US and Doctors. It's called Under the Kinfe (Got the name from Trauma Ceneter: Under the Kife and Second Opinion). So I hope this will become well developed and fun story to read. I plan to start tonight, but that depends! :XD: I can't even write Kingdom Dawn (Gonna rename it to this after I psost this) because the block is so great. So really, a story of 2020 A.D America about doctors will be fun, I think! I'm going to add a list of Doctoral terms, and the rest is a suprise. But I will tell you (And everyone else) that it's a Surgeon(s) story, with some other doctors...Anyway, look out for it, and sorry about that...Can't develop it anymore for a while. I thought I was gonna be able to write it, but that might not happen. :XD: :D :XD: Talk to you later!

Um, what are you on? Whenever I go to Wal mart or Gamestop, or any store that sells video games for that matter, they are always in stock. So that's bull. The Wii is never in stock. That is the truth. And why not Wii? After all, they will dominate the gaming market soon, and they are fun.

So true...But you never know, too, he could hate it because he might think it's like Gamecube, which I admit, was kiddy. But the Wii is no kiddy, that's why I was comparing with some die hard graphics fans at my school who make fun of the Wii because Gamecube stunk :mrgreen: And because the graphics are everything to them. Why does it have to look realistic to be fun? Give me a SNES, N64, or any old ATARI game and I'll play that, no complaints.

No, she's kind to everyone, so there's nothing between them...But I'll leave the future of this story in your hands, think about it. Maybe, maybe not.

You are exactly like the kids at my school. You make a lame claim that the Wii sucks with absolutely no justification or anything. You hate the Wii because...Is it beause you can't get one?

Thanks, I saw the mistakes, such as "te" instead of "The" and stuff. I'll change later, Thanks!

Chapter 7: The Furies The dark voice pierced through the sacred wood, and it quickly frightened Llia, who knew the voice. The wind began to pick up, as the tree's violently thrusted the one's by their sides; an eerie silence temporarily overtook the area, but a response from the tree's was instantly heard: "I'm dissapointed in you, Guthix...Telling lies get's you no were...However, I suppose it's to protect them from their fates, but it will not work." The deep voice chuckled, then awaited a response. "Come out and fight me...Orion." Fienrir furiously said, clenching his fists. "I'm so glad you remembered me..." A rustling from the tree's made Fienrir jerk his head to his back, as a quake came from behind him. The man was cloked in a strange red coat...Like Vincents? "But you have the wrong name, so you've forgotten me..." "It can't be!" "It can." Vincent lifted his head, a grim, penetrating glance made Fienrir quake. "Two years. I never though this day would come like swift wings, but, then again, it did. And now, I stand with you and your friends...Your bloody disiples. Well, aren't you going to give me a hug?" Fienrir ripped his blades from their sheathes, sparks flying from their draw point. "No? Fine. But I do know the Furies want to say hello." Fienrir stood his ground, but jumped as five quakes eminated from the ground, and trre's began to collapse at every side. Silence, then slow trodding of the five warriors. "I can't believe you confused Vincent with me." Orion chuckled. "Look at them. Weak." A female voice said. "All of them." Another female voice said. The five walked closer, three of them being abnormally sized men and two average sized women. Orion cracked his muscles and joints, still laughing insanly. "What the Hell do you want?" Llia exclaimed, her rapier drawn and an angry look upon her face. "It's not obvious?" One of the women said. "No? Fine. We are here to shed some light on the real happenings of the past." "Do it and I'll kill you, Pandora!" Fienrir snarled. "Big tough guy, huh? I'd be nervous if I were you." She jumped at him, her blade swiftly drawn out, but Fienrir disicively retalliated and slashed her, blood spurting onto the ground and his sword. She plowed into the ground, and te tohers took up arms. "Strong. Pandora was a fool to try to harm you." Vincent looked at the gasping girl on the ground. "Get up, you worthless---" He kicked her stomach, and she rose slowly. Gil was enraged quickly. "Leave her alone!" Gil charged in, knifes being slashed around Vincent, each doged or evaded with no faults. Gil collapsed in exaushtion, panting heavily. Vincent then kicked him back to the others. "Fool." Vincent chuckled. "Why do you do this?" Llia proclaimed, helping Gil to his feet with the utmost care. "We are just listening to orders." Orion said. "Vincent wants to take up your hand---In marrige. The village needs a queen. And we'll slaughter you all until we get her." The five and Vincent walked closer. "Fight us. See if you'll win." More in a while...A continum of this chapter, so don't worry!

Ah. I understand. Ya, most of my friends say that...But this thing has already defied gaming, anyway, so I think a lot of games will be good with it...Now, they changed their minds! EXCEPT...Um, I actually can't think of any yet that look dull for it...Unless you count the kiddie games, but those count for ALL systems. Erm, can anyone name a game that shouldn't be on the Wii?

Metal Gear Solid 2. Just a bad game, overall. Nothing rreally more to say. And I agree with Nadril, the Halo games are overatted, and people fuss about it too much. I reall don't see the big deal (Although, playing multi- player and online is OK).

Whew! Can't think of anything else for Kingdom of the Dawn :XD: So I'll post a few chapters tonight. Good ones. Don't miss 'em! :XD: :shock: :twisted: :D

I wouldn't count the Wii out yet so soon. After all, the 360 was released a year ago, at only 10M sold for that time, while the Wii, after being out for 4 months, have sold 4M. they war never involved Nintendo though, as soon as they announced the Wii they weren't even included in it, it was purely between the graphics consoles, the ps3 and 360, trying to beat each other with the graphics, considering the delays and the price, 360 has won, but if you count all consoles in then yes Wii has a chance of selling more Wrong. The war was between all 3 consoles. Tell me, guys; if IGN sucks, then were do you get your information? Every time I look on IGN about a game, it's very accurate. So tell me: Have you ever been on IGN? And if so, then why does it suck? And if not, then why agree with everyone else what you have not used? And that is suprising! A girl complaining about the cuteness of the game (Not trying to be offensive). But I still wonder why TP is...ERM, cute. Why is it not plausable? They are all very fun; especially tramua center, Splinter cell, Redsteel, and a little bit of Call of Duty never hurt. And although some I mentioned are multisystem, they are all still fun on the Wii. Tramua center by far the best surgical simulation since the DS, by far.

So. In your eyes a game that hasn't got a "T" rating is a game for little kiddies? That's strange. [/hide] psst: I think he's saying that T isn't a kiddie game but instead is saying that the Wii doesn't have any T+ games except for maybe one or two. He's been going on about kiddie games for ages, so I don't think he would mean differently now. This is the first post that I have ever criticized the library of the Wii, and that was because some idiot who makes all of his info up claimed the Wii library was more diverse and had more games. I never made my info up, Blue. I got it all from IGN, and they know what they are talking about. Sorry, you are wrong yet again.

Ummm...Zelda is no were near childish; it's so sinister and dark, Verynice violence with no blood that it's actually directed towards...Older audiences. Hate to say, but MANY teens play Zelda, and if you are saying we aren't normal, then up yours. Abnormal teendagers love games that are overatted and violent...And now, the Wii will be for everyone, literally. Your same defense is that it is directed to only younger audiences, but the games you speak of are most likely Cars and Flushed Away. And although they sell them, so do the other systems. So really, the Wii isn't young, and will match the PS3 and X-Box hights sooner or later. And that's a fact ytou can't argue. And for the last time, Midna isn't an animal, [wagon]. P.S. Blue, you don't mind putting periods at the end of each sentance, do you?

So. In your eyes a game that hasn't got a "T" rating is a game for little kiddies? That's strange. psst: I think he's saying that T isn't a kiddie game but instead is saying that the Wii doesn't have any T+ games except for maybe one or two. (Sighs) Wow. My first time coming back here in a while. I think it's funny how Blue thinks there are only going to be 1 or 2 T games. There are going to be so many of them (And many M games, for that matter) that it will change it's former "Kiddy image" (in Blues eyes) to more of an adult image. Any game that has an E in it is just as fun (Sometimes). Blue, you inda think that the Wii's predassesor is wimpy, because it didn't have a lot of T or M games. But I'm glad that many companies are contributing to the Wii, like Ubisoft, SQ Enix, and Namco. Especially Namco: Soul Calibur is fun. Anyway, just because there are only a couple of T games now, doesn't mean there will be none in the future. BTW, last I went to Wal*Mart, Blue, they barely had any PS3 games, and I'm not meaning they sold out, it's just the library was small. Along with Gamestop, too.

It all depends on what people want to play. Some of my friends are like GET THE WII OUT,others are like ZOMG WHERES THE PS3. I think that the only game aimed towards the Wii is sports, and they tried to aim it towards zelda but its still extremely childish. Any game that has a little animal giggling every minute is childish in my opinion Your opinion is cool, but where are the talking animals in either of those games??? :-k If you are talking bout Midna, she isn't an animal, and if you talk of Epona, she doesn't talk (Well, if you turn into a Wolf...)...But the Wii itself has so much potiential, that playing a James Bond game, for example, would make it so fun because pointing a gun around makes it realistic, not only that, but it's multiplayer, so playing James Bond with your friends would be awesome with that game.

Erm, this is a different Xavier, I just like the name because it sounds cool, lol. Looks like it's my turn to take a small break, need a little time to develop this story. Edit: Oh, I'll change ASAP ty, and this is only the beginning, anyway...See ya in a while!

Uh-huh, believe what you want to believe, weirdo, and by boy, I meant you are probably some little kid, not my boy. And you believe in mindreading...I'm creeped out. And there is something wrong with your reading (Also spelling, bolded red). Fanboys are crazed over the system and say it's the best. I don't say it's the best, I simply say it will do better than the other 2 systems, so maybe that's why you are instigating why I'm a fanboy :?: ... Erm, I'm done arguing now, have fun with TP. And I'm not meaning that in a bad way. :D

Dude, no one said anything about throwing pokeballs, not only does it sound wrong :shock: but it is off topic. This console is no kiddie, and you know it, yet you still don't feel like defending it. Give it up, PS3 isn't great, I've played it, my friends hate Sony now, and you know the Wii has a lot of games that are targeting the adult audience, yet you use everything that was said about Gamecube a long time ago, basically saying the Wii is just like the gamecube. And those stories aren't altered, they are actually all new, and I know plenty of people that love them. Metroid, Zelda; none are altered. I'm sorry, but you are still stereotyping and being a hypocrite. For the finale, the PS3 is a PS2 with altered graphics and you know it.

Again, you always think you are right, and if you deny this, then you are a fool. The Wii has games directed to older audiences too. You should be saying "The PS3 has games that are so violent and ridiculous that it attracts older auidiences just to see the bloodshed within the games, and that cannot be denied." Than, I wouldn't have to make you look like an idiot in front of everyone, although you sound like an idiot. I know a lot of people that would rather go with Mario than to play a game that is ridiculously overdone with too much violence. And, hypocracy is big with you. The Wii , Ps3 and X-Box alike have kiddie games, since you are probably talking about the chicken little games and such. Or if you are talking about Zelda and Wii sports, than shame on you :shame: , because those games at least give you a workout rather than sit down, and aren't even close to kiddie games. Those games actually give you the feel that you are swinging the sword and/or a baseball bat. And if you call Soul Calibur or Dance Dance Revolution kiddie games, then you need to get untangled in all of the Resistance games and play those, because at least those are awesome. Super smash bro's isn't kiddie; nor is metroid, James Bond, Splinter Cell, Prince of Persia, Manhunt, Scarface, The Godfather, Fire emblem or Final Fantasy, dragon quest, and any war games. Through this whole list, I didn't mention one kiddy game, and if you think Mario is kiddie, then I guess you have never went back to video game roots and you need to.

No, one of my friends who have played Halo since they first came out read the books before they were made, which convinced me to read them.