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just a random one here, any wishes you might have just post here... Personally I wish if someone would not be so lazy and read my developing story in the Varrock Library.. it is called "Got the Life" and it is really good. thats what I wish, but its only a wish... its not like it will come true on this forum.. What do you wish for?

well I never really critisize work, I love it all, but your approach to the story was rather dull. it was interesting at the end when Erin found her place scattered about, who would be searching? all in all, it was rather interesting. I just recommend that you have a little more action to keep your readers attention, suspence and all that jazz.... Post the next part, i'll read it. I just wish someone would read my story... it is good....

hey I am learning the hard way that people are just to lazy to read here. whats the point of writing the stories if no one gives a damn. I am writing a story right now, I have the first 3 parts posted and there just collecting dust. I will actually read your story and post my feedback, I just wanted to see what side conversation was going on first, I realy like reading fan fictions.. I just wish someone would read mine in return..

Got The Life (Part 3) By Robby Dinder (cya_tremend) I hope you like it! "God pains me, the more I see the life, who wants to see? God told me, I've already got the life, oh I say..." Deep in the Withered forests of Varrock dwindled a raging fighter, training his wits to the end. He was meditating on a cement block with insignias drawn on. The power flowing through his veins, he was in a state of complete relaxation. The man was wearing a green suit, casual and light weight. His short blsck hair flowing in the wind, and his shoes a comftorable blue. His meditation was complete when he heard the soft cry of a woman in the dead wilderness. A scream so hollow that it would shatter the tears of any mortal. The man arose to his feet, and he ran off into the distant shadows of dead trees and dirt. The scream constantly growing in magnitude, the man sped up his running to confront the danger. Once he got close enough, he saw what looked like a woman in armor fighting this man in a full suit of blue. He weilded a strong red axe, and he was enraged with the woman. The man was attacking the woman, and was winning the fight. The woman caught a faint image of the man in green, and gasped for help. "Why do I get a feeling that he is not just trying to be cute." The man said to himself, the woman over hearing him. "Help you idiot!" the woman hollared, taking a blow from one of the mans swipes of the red axe. "I can't beat him, moron!" "Fine..." The man said running up to the knight, landing a solid punch on his head, knocking off the his helmet. The man was knocked back, and he fell on the ground about five feet away from where he was hit. A dull thump was heard when he hit. "Why the hell are you hurting this girl?" The enraged man called, his hand still balled up in a fist, the other hand gripping his arm. "Plain and simple, my boy. I want her money and armor, and I guess I will take your life as well." The knight said with a crude smile on his face. He got back to his feet, and the knight raised his axe. "Ugly people shouldn't be allowed to smile that much!" The boy called out, showing his true nature. He ran up to the knight and started a berret of punches and kicks on the solid armor, cracking it in half and causing some serious damage to the now pathetic knight. One final kick was all that he needed to defeat the knight, sending him soaring in the air and hitting a tree. It cracked and fell down, felling the knight. "There, are you happy?" The boy said in a sarcastic voice, aiming twoards the woman. "I am going home now, needless to say that was kindof fun." "Thank you, I am in your debt." The woman said slumping to her knees in exaustion. "Don't sweat it." The boy said walking off. The woman looked puzzled, and realized that she could take the armor and weapon of the knight, and any other valuables she could carry. She had a smile on her face picking up the red axe, and looking back at her savior she thanked him again in spirit. She took the armor and everything else, and headed out of the wilderness, ready to make some money. ------------------ Gohan, running out into the center of Varrock, meet up with Kyra once again in the fury of the merchants. Varrock square was always riddled with wandering merchants, buying and selling items to make a profit. a Woman came running up and hit Gohan in his shoulder, on accident, with a few wounds on her arms. She carried some damaged armor and a red axe, along with her own weapon and armor. Gohan paid no mind to the clumsy woman, and weaved his way through the merchants. "Kyra, got anything to sell, well this is the place to do it." Gohan yelled, hoping that Kyra could hear over the defening merchants yells. "I am fine for now, where did you say we could train again?" Kyra said making her way through the last pile of people, waiting for Gohan to fumble through. "We can go north to the woods, there are some bears and other creatures like that wandering around. It is always quiet there, unlike here." Gohan started walking down one of the roads with Kyra following. Gohan noticed that she was confused in all the mahem of the merchants, but shook it off when they reached the west bank of Varrock. The town was small, but it always seemed to be crowded with merchants, so there was another bank to be seen. They started walking up the north path, noticing the noise of clanging metal from the smith shop. they passed a church and the gates of a castle. They reached the edge of the city where the north gate was, never closed but carefull guards always on the watch. Kyra started to talk with one of the guards, laughing and poking fun at some casual things. They talked for about five minutes and she broke free, still giggling from one of the guards jokes. They reached the woods shortly after, with some luming Black knights and rats among the trees. They reached a dead patch of land, apon realizing that it was the deadly wilderness. "This is the wilderness, where no rules apply. People always attack other people to get there money. They kill for it, and sell what they get in Varrock." Gohan said walking along the wilderness line. "It is all here on this sign." Kyra closley examined the sign, reading the bold faced text. Warning!! Beyond this point is the wilderness. Proceed with caution. "Well that dose not look like fun. I don't want to go in there unless I really need to." Kyra said to Gohan. She let out a yawn of relief, and started walking again. They reached the first bear shortly after reading the sign. It was picking at a dead rat, eating the meat and cleaning the bones. Kyra got out her sword, and attacked the bear. She pierced the tough fur of the bear and blood rushed out. She felt a bit bad for what she was doing, but it was neccesary for her to get stronger. The bear was felled after a few hits from her sword, nd slumped on its side, dying. "Well I feel stronger, the little bugger was good." Kyra said over the rustling of the trees. A few cracks of sticks underfoot was heard, and a man with a green suit was standing before them. "Who are you?" Kyra said very cautious. "Whats it to you?" The arrogant boy snapped. "We just want to know, is that too much to ask for?" Gohan calmly said. He had a look on his face like he was serious, but he just wanted to know. "The names Yusuke. Who the hell are you?" Yusuke said, venting some of his angers on the two of them. "I am Kyra, and he is Gohan. Good to meet you I guess. Why are you so mad anyways?" Kyra said looking confused. "I am not, really, I just have a lot on my mind. You guys training?" Yusuke said looking at Gohan. "It looks like he could use some, he looks weak." "Shut up." Gohan said coldly. "I am training and I will be stronger." Gohan started to walk off when Yusuke grabbed his arm. "I will help you train, it looks like you can use it." Yusuke started to walk off ahead, into the wilderness. "This place is great, there are a lot of strong fighters here. Lets go fight some of them to make you stronger. I will back you up." Yusuke looked at Kyra. "You comming, granny?" he said sarcasticaly, laughing while he walked off into the deep dead trees. Kyra didn't pay any attention to Yusuke, and carefuly walked into the wild where Gohan and Yusuke were trailing. The deep forest of dead trees looked like they all died from the blood of other people. The place smelled horrid and Kyra thought she heard screaming ahead. Gohan tried to hold back his fears, and boldly walked in front of Yusuke. Out of no where a knight came rushing out and attacked Kyra, who was confused as it was. Kyra, unsheathing her sword, blocked the powerful arm of the knight and sent the blade of his sword back with his body. She started to sweat a bit, and blocked yet another one of the fierce warriors attacks. "Why don't you show this young whipper snapper how it was done in the old days?" Yusuke called out laughing. "Gladly you patronizing jackass." Kyra yelled taking the offence of her opponent, landing a hit with her sword on the knights body. A bit of blood splashed from the hit, and Kyra could feel the intensity of the hit. "I am sorry, but you started this." Kyra said piercing the knights leg and kicking it to deal pain. "Wow, she is good." Gohan said in awe. "Now get out of here, fool. I don't want to kill you, but I didn't say i wouldn't." Kyra said knocking the knight back, with a serious look on her face. "Wait, grab his stuff." Yusuke said kicking the knight, knocking him unconcious. He pillaged his armor and weapon, also a green metal hat, like a party hat. There was a little bit of coins in the Knights pocket, and Yusuke threw it to Gohan. He nodded and took the change. "Ok, we are done here. This hat looks worthless, but I will take it anyways. who wants it?" "I'll take it I guess, it looks kindof cool." Gohan said nimbly. Yusuke shrugged and tossed the hat to Gohan, taking the armor and dividing it between the three of them. "We should go make some money then, to get some more equipment and go train." Gohan said walking out of the wild. "Comming sweetie, I will be right there." Kyra said turning her attention to Yusuke. "comming?" She said "Yeah, why not." Yusuke said running off out of the wilderness. "Your not gonna leave this old fossil behind, are you?" Kyra said running off with the others, armor in hand. (Come on and post. I know that someone is reading.......)

You can post anything you want here. I want to know how you like the story so far, and if anyone is even reading... Don't be lazy. I know its long, but its good.

this idea will not work. It would make members (F2P & P2P) feel scared because there will indeed be people abusing the system. I say we just leave the scammer controlling to Jagex, and not the public

and you would be skipping the Cosmic runes. It dose not go from body to Chaos, you have the Cosmic runes in there. Why would Jagex place in a new feture if they skip one? Just enjoy the fact that you have runecrafting to play with at all!

Got The Life (Part 2) By Robby Dinder (cya_tremend) I hope you like it! "God pains me, the more I see the life, who wants to see? God told me, I've already got the life, oh I say..." "I am you, You are me. We will become one." A mysterious figure wispered to himself, standing on the Cliff of the sacred White Wolf Mountains. A mystical Black aura enveloping him as he spoke, and a look of true evil was on his face. The man stood in his Leather overcoat, a marvel in leather crafting, a black shirt, and thickly threaded blue pants. His black, long hair almost paints the image in the minds of millions as the hair of the gods. The shoes on the man were irregular indeed, blue and as if sneaking shoes, light and breathable. There was also a red scarf around his neck, flapping in the wind. In the presence of this Black aura, was a spirit, unseen from human eyes, like the man was speaking telepathicaly with someone else. Deep in the pits of hell, three men stood, waiting. The area that they were in was dark and gloomey, with stalagmites all around. Purple fog was formed around a black pit in the ground, a seemingly endless tomb for the already dead if fallen into, and a cement path leading to the pit was seen. On the Ceramic path was a giant crystal ball, screening the man on the cliff. The three men were discussing ideas, and one of the men was the exact copy of the man on the cliff. "We'll open the gates of Hell together and bring the real and other world together!" -------- Breaking free from a dream, Gohan screamed as he remembered what he saw. He did not know what to think about his dream, was it forshadowing the events to come, or is it just a silly dream? Gohan pushed the thought out of his head and returned to reality. He was still in the forest, the fire he made burned out, a small pile of ashes was all that remained of the burning glory. Staggering, Gohan got up from his resting spot and decided that today he would train. Gohan started walking back to the small town of Rimmington, just south of where he slept. The Witch's house, still gloomy, seemed to have gained popularity; there was a line of about four people waiting to talk to the hag. Gohan remembered the little house with the rats, and decided that he would train his skills there. Once he got in the house, there were twice as many rats than he saw before; there was a hole in the wall, and it seemed to lead to a nest of rats. Gohan un sheathed his sword, staggering under its immense weight, and started swinging it around wildly. He killed off a couple of rats, and he felt stronger already! Gohan somehow felt a new skill, and he urged himself to try it. The Z Sword of Legends gives you magnificant powers as you grow to use it, and that is exactly why Gohan tried so hard to get it. Conjuring up his new ability, Gohan let out a blast of Magic, shooting a rat with the power of wind on his side. The attack tore the rat to shreds, and Gohan felt stronger once again. He trained madly for a good 20 minutes, with rats comming non stop. He would become a fierce warrior in a matter of days if he kept training like this. Out of thin air, a mysterious figure in shining blue armor appeared inside the rat house. The body of this person was covered in this mystic blue armor, with a shining white sword in one hand, and a blue shield in the other hand. Out of pure instinct, Gohan felt that he was being violated of his training spot and became enraged with the mysterious appearance of this person. "Get out, I am trying to train here!" Gohan rudly yelled, getting madder with every passing second. The figure stood there, motionless. The Knight was ignoring the rats, and did not make one motion. After a cold standstill, the figure took off the blue helmet, revealing long white hair, and a beautiful face. The knight was a woman in mens armor. "Oh I am sorry, I won't bother you. I just don't know how I got here..." The woman said. "I am sorry, did someone try robbing you or something?" Gohan said, revealing his caring side again. "I don't know... I don't know what I am doing here, I don't know anything but my own name.." She said, looking very confused to what was happening to her. She had a bump on her head that was visable from Gohans view, probably making her forget everything. "I can help you out, I am not a bad warrior. I know what to do here, and I can help you get back on track again." Gohan said firmly. "My name is Gohan, what is yours?" "My name is Kyra... Glad to meet you Gohan!" She said with a smile on her face. "I would love to get to know you, can you help me with everything... show me the basics of... being a warrior?" She said with a fading smile. "Sure, I will help you fight and get stronger. You look strong already, looks like I will have to train with you to be as strong as you. he he." "Great, lets get started then, that thing you did, you attacked that rat.. I saw that. How did you do that?" She said trying to immitate what Gohan did, putting out her hand and tried to attack a rat. "Do I do this--" and before finishing her sentence she let out a powerful blast of energy, summoning the powers of fire to blast the rat to a pile of nothingness. Stunned, she lowered her hand and looked at Gohan wildly, waiting for a reply. "Looks like your a few steps ahead of me. I can only use wind and your using fire. I am Jealous!" Gohan said, firing his own blast of wind at the last rat in the room, feeling the surge of power run through his veins. He was getting stronger with every fight, and there was no way that he would end the training. "We'll open the gates of Hell together and bring the real and other world together!" "Aah!" Gohan screamed, recalling the dream he had the night before. "What is wrong, Gohan?" Kyra asked, taking off her heavy armor, revealing a purple dress and white top. She looked like she was a woman in her 60's, but she was very powerful indeed. "Ooh nothing, just a bad thought. Lets go to Varrock and do some more training against something more powerful than rats." Gohan said opening the door to the rat house, walking out into the central courtyard of Rimmington. "Ok, comming. Just lad the way!" Kyra said running up twoards Gohan, the two of them walking off into the woods, their destination Varrock. The journey took Kyra and Gohan through some thick forests, Kyra gawking everytime she saw another strong warrior walking casualy by. Their trails led them ouside of the old mansion of Count Daynor, with the dead trees giving the estate that Evil touch. Some of the trees were posessed by evil spirits, which they actually attacked Gohan and gave him a new wound to heal. He did not have any of the potion the Witch gave him anymore, so he just would have to grin and bear it until they got to Varrock. When they got out of Daynor woods, they found a weird Barbarian, with the traditional Helmet. Kyra was brutaly attacked by the menace, but she had the skill to take out her sword and attack the Barbarian before it made a strike. Kyra still did not know that she had it in her. Sifting their way through the Barbarian Village, and past the bridge and path, they meet their destination and walked into varrock. The large bank that greeted them at the gate was the first stop they needed to go. Kyra got a Teller right away, and the guy recognised her. Withought saying anything, he pulled open Kyra's account. Kyra screamed for joy as she saw what she had in the bank. She called Gohan over to see what she had, and Gohan's expression became a moniacle smile, then to a laughing smile. Kyra had sets of armor, and a lot of money, along with hundreds of potions to choose from. Feeling generous, Kyra pulled out some items and gave them to Gohan, consisting of vials of potions, money, armor, and a weapon. Gohan gave the weapon back, and un sheathed the Z Sword. She nodded understandably and closed her account for the time being. Gohan got a Teller and opened his measley account. It consisted of feathers, a few pieces of gold, and some meat. The items Kyra gave him would help out dearly in his present condition. He deposited some of his personal belongings, money, and the potions into the bank, and closed it. He started to put on the armor that Kyra gave him, and the helmet was too big for him, so he deposited it for later use. The armor was crisply dark blue, shining in the light of the Bank. With the Z Sword, Gohan looked like a mighty warrior of fables, but he just laughed it off and meet up with Kyra outside the Bank. Gohans Black [bleep]ey Hair gave him the expression of a laid back teenager, and his face was always good looking. Gohan has always had a pure heart and soul, never acting greedy, mean, or turning out on a chance to help someone in need, even if his own life was in danger. Gohan Father was a mighty warrior, he had a Legendary set of armor and weapon, and he was well known through out the land. His mother was a carring person just Like his Father, and He always wanted to be just like them. As a kid, Gohans father discovered that he had hidden powers, and he wanted to bring them out. His mother though wanted him to study and become a smart boy. Gohan did both, becoming very wise and strong. His mother was arrested when Gohan turned 13, and his father died of a Malignant heart Virus. Gohan was left to train himself for the road ahead with no help at all. He never had much friends, they were either too scared of him, or too good to be with him. He was alone. Gohan heard about the Legendary Z Sword from a merchant in Lumbridge, telling him that it was in a mystical tomb of rock and no one could release it from there. Legends told of a warrior who got the sword from the Gods themselves, and placed it in the sacred rock so no one would be able to use its power. It was protected by the Goblins, the Leader being the strongest in all of the Goblin race. Comming back to reality, Gohan remembered where he was. He had no time to think about his past, because he finally made a Friend. Kyra would be the best friend that Gohan would ever have. (The second Part of the story, feel free to leave any commentary behind. I am having fun with this and I am developing a thick plot.. I would love to hear what you think of it.)

Good idea, I would have never thought of it... Oh wait I did..... I think I was like the first person to come up with the idea... can be found here in the topic "Shapeshifting" http://forum.tip.it/viewtopic.php?p=941293#941293 Just wanted to say that... Also it is a good idea..

you know you have been playing too much runescape when you start writing short stories about events. And expecially when you make your own enemies in them, adding things from other games, tv shows, and stuff like that into them. That is when you have been playing too much Runescape.

I am actualy a creative writer, and I am writing a story right now. I would like to submit it, but I have broken it into a few parts (Part 1 is posted now) and I will need more time for writing, and fixing. It is called "Got The Life" and it is my third story on this forum. Concidering me can be a good thing, and I would love to see my work somewhere other than a forum. I also do many drawings, but I do not own a scanner...

Got The Life (Part 1) By Robby Dinder (cya_tremend) I hope you like it! "God pains me, the more I see the life, who wants to see? God told me, I've already got the life, oh I say..." With the newly aquired sword in hand, Gohan swung with all of his might at the ravaging leader of the Goblins. The legendary sword pierced through the rough exterior of the shell and sliced the Goblins insides. The battle was finally over, as Gohan fell to the ground in pain. His side hurt from the kick a while back, and his arms were truely sore from releasing the lunker of a sword from the rocky tomb it rested in. The Z-Sword, the sword of Legends, was finaly in his posession, and he just needed to train with it to release its true power. "You are truely worthy of the sword, you deserve to keep it." the dastardly Goblin admitted; sinking to one knee, and lowering his head. The battle had lasted over 30 minutes with the Goblin Leader, with his whole fleet of minions at his constant watch, as if he was proving his strength to them all. "Please leave us now before we decide to take the sword back." The Goblin raved. It was time to leave here, and head for the town of Rimmington. Gohan picked up the sword once more, and turned back to the path. As people walked by this slightly limping figure, they held back their pains. Gohan had a gash in his left knee that was still pouring blood. It was a wound from a poison tipped spear; A gift from one of the goblins. He needed to see the Witch of rumors to get the antidote for this new kind of poison. He was feeling the pain every step he took, as if the gods were testing his strength. The intense heat of the day was not making things any easier for the wandering teen. It was like millions of invisible arrows raining on his every pore on his body, clearly making the wounds on his back all the much more painful. Walking up to a gate to the magnificent town of Falador Gohan heard the laughter of children playing in the trees where a magnificant Yew stood. Reaching the gate and entering the town, Gohan sat on a stump of a tree and rested his feet. "You need some bandages kid." A Guard called out at him, pointing to a path in front of Gohans fading view. He was truely exausted. Picking up his pack, Gohan set on the trail, curving around a mysterious castle surrounded by a moat. He passed by a Gem shop, and a couple local homes on his path, and reached the Town bank. It was an overly crowded building with lace curtains over the windows. Yelling over the already loud customers were the kind Bank Tellers and Bank Keppers. The line would die down, so Gohan set off to find any water. Directly outside of the bank was the fountain of youth, to Gohan atleast; Pouring liquid energy and free for the taking. An empty vial could be seen in the rocks by the fountain, and Gohan reached for it, wiping it on his shirt, and then filling it. He took about 2 vial fulls of water into his dry mouth, feeling rejuvinated after every drop. With newly aquired strength, Gohan filled a vial for the road, and stuck it in his back pocket. After rummaging around the town, Gohan could start feeling the effects of the poison kicking in. He needed to get to the Town of Rimmington, and fast. The quickest route was to head south and cut through the woods. Doing so, Gohan would have to evade countless monsters and enemies, but it was only a short walk from the south gates. Gohan started to jog, feeling his knee pierce his nerves with a most unpleasing pain with every step. The poison was running its course through the body of the youth, ploting to take the life of everything in its way. Making his way out of the gate, Gohan saw his first foe, a raging Highwayman taking the life of a poor soul, probably only 8 years of age on the withered body. Gohan rushed away from the trees, and got on the path where the kid was struggling for his life. "Wake up, you are in caring arms." Gohan wispered in the fading body. Deeming it neccesary, Gohan pulled out the vial of water, and a small mithiral laced bag from his pack. He pulled out a tiny bean, with mystical healing powers, his last one in Gohans posession. He placed the bean in the kids mouth and helped him chew, giving the water to the youth. After about 2 minutes of the scene, the kid started coughing and regained controll of his body. Reering up in an upright position, he glared at his savior. "What happened? Where am I?" The kid said in a low voice, with a cough following afterwards. "My leg, it is healed, did you heal me? Where is that man who attacked me?" "Calm down, too many questions. Just relax, you are fine now." Gohan said, feeling through his pack for any food he might have. He found an uncooked piece of meat in a piece of paper wraping, and gave it to the boy. "Take this to one of the Guards back in Town and ask them to cook it for you. Eat it and you should feel fine afterwards." "Thank you mister!" The boy said rising to his feet. He gave one last look at Gohan, and ran back to Falador. Gohan needed to get to Rimmington, and get dinner for the night to come. Staggering along, he made it back into the deep woods to get to his destination. Finaly reaching the town of Rimmington, Gohan veered past the pit of rocks and dashed for the central courtyard. Hidden back from reality was a musky building, darkened by the shadows of larger buildings. Opening the door, a large Cauldron was the first thing to catch Gohans attention. In the shadows of the room lurked a mysterious Witch, calling his attention with her eerie presence. "If it is desired, you shall aquire it." The Witch mumbled, as if a spiritual message. "I am poisoned, and I need help, please can you conjure up a potion to treat it? I am not rich, I am merely a beginning warrior of my class. I can't pay, but I need your help." Gohan ranted, the poison making him weary of his thoughts. The witch let out the laugh of a Tyrant and began searching through one of the books piled on her table. "I can make your potion, Weary Wanderer, I just require a few ingredients for this potion, and you can have it free of charge." The Witch tore out a page from the book and handed it to Gohan, a list of ingredients needed. "All I need is the four items starred on the sheet, and the potion is yours." "I will get your ingredients, and I thank you." Gohan, still in the doorway of the room, started off to find the ingredients. He needs red berries, an onion, a piece of rat meat, and a rat's tail. An easy task for Gohan, only if he was not so paralyzed by the pain in his leg, and the rushing poison in his veins. Gohan found a patch of red berries outside the town, and an onion just a bit farther north. It lurked in front of a large building, high and wide. Sword fighting could be heard from the inside, and Gohan walked up to open the door. Locked, of course, but one warrior slipped a key through one of the bars. He did not say anything, he just had a smile on his face when Gohan opened the door. He walked him in, and then went back to fighting. There were giant, tailless rats in the building, with doors all around. The carcases of rats were piling up by the warriors, and the meat was still fresh. Gohan picked up some for the Witch, and some for himself. He almost left it behind, but he found what looked like a key, painted red, in one of the piles of bones. Withought making a sound, Gohan snatched the key and headed back outside. All he needed now was a tail of a rat, wherever that might be. He decided not to get too far off the path, and headed back for Rimmington. He found a rat scurring around the outside of a small house. Gohan hirried inside to find four more of these rats, and he slammed the door not wanting to let any escape from his wrath. Unsheathing the legendary sword, Gohan swung at the first one that moved, succesfuly killing the rat nearest his left. The Killing of the rat was easy, but with the extreme weight of the Z Sword, it gave Gohan an extra boost of strength. Apparently training on these common rats would raise his strength and make him stronger, but he would do that after he got the potion made. Gohan picked the rats tail off the dead carcas, and stormed back to the Witch's house to make the potion. Once back, Gohan could get a clearer look inside the house, brick walls and a musty red carpet underneath a large cauldron. It was indeed a real fixer upper, but Gohan did not mind it. "I have everything, can you make the potion now?" Gohan said holding the four items in front of the witch. "First we need to burn this meat, so we shall place it on the fire. I will take these, and you can sit in the chair next to you while you wait." The Witch began grabbing ingredients from a shelf over the large table, and started mixing a toxic stew inside the cauldron. Nearly in a minute the meat was charred to perfection, something Gohan could do when he was trying to eat. At last the potion was finished, and the Witch poured some of it into a vial and gave it to him. "This is what you desired, you shall have it." The Witch said walking back into her corner, motioning for the door with her hand. "If you need my services again, I will be here." Gohan nodded greatfuly and took a sip of the potion. He started to feel better as he finished off the vial. Gohan opened his mouth to say something, but the Witch nodded and walked into another room, leaving Gohan be. Feeling alive again, Gohan also felt stronger than before. With one final look, Gohan exited the house, and left the town. Once reaching the forest, Gohan had to improvise his sword for an axe, and he hacked away at a tree, retrieving wood as a reward. Also improvising, he conjured up a flame with two rocks and started a fire with the wood. He pulled out the delicate meat, ripping off a large piece for the nights meal. Carefuly placing it on the fire, he managed to cook the meat with ought burning it. He ate with a smile on his face, and fell asleep, weary of his pains of stress and exaustion, to awaken as a stronger and happier warrior. (More to come, I am only breaking this up into sections because... I am on Summer Vacation and I am bored already. No Short Stories for me, I am going all out! Tell me what you think while I write some more.)

yes I know that, thats why I said members have fire arrows.

There are fire arrows for members atleast. Its fun! Whenever I go for some fire giants, I usualy get like 100 rune arrows. What do I do with them you say? I go to the underground pass and get a lot of wet cloths, wrap em on the arrows, and then light them with the fire. They are real affective, and they never loose their flame! They go for a good price too.

O so i a nobdoey! Am i soo replusive taht i heve to moke no senze?

which will put the bars of runescape in buisness!

all alchohal burns in some way or another. Beer burns for 1 min Karmajia rum burns for 1min and a half *Keg of beer burns for 2 mins *=members item Cool huh?

That is still prety complicated.. On Jagex's part.. Being a member is great though, and it would be awesome for this firemaking thing to work.....as I would be able to burn some dead trees.

That would be a great idea. But of course, you have to have the members privilage to the matter. Say at like lvl 40 you can only burn bonfires and members get the rest... It can go either way of course.. I think that instead of using wheat on the unlit torch, you should use the wet cloth that Kortif gives you in the underground pass.

I feel that putting a level capp on F2P is nonsence... I'm a member and have been for a while now (1999) and I have seen a lot of updates on F2P but when I became a member the updates stopped and Jagex started working on members. That is a bit unfair to all the F2Pers out there but the times went on. A lot of updates on the P2P side, but none on the F2P side.... I say that Jagex should put in like a new quest every 4 months to F2P to make the experience for the players who cant pay to have more fun with the game.