Bluejayfan94

Hey Sephy can you review the next chapter in Draggneth please? Thanks lolz

Dwarfs are too small though I LIKE BEING BIG

We will all make you read it. :twisted: :twisted: Its really good. :thumbsup:

How many people have read my story? I want more feedback, other than from Sephy. Hopefully, I get out of the newest case of writer's block that has affected me. If not, Well... Lets no go there.

YAY!!!! Sephys BACK!!!! EDIT- Sephy you can review my next chapter if you want. And I can't believe this but I HAVE WRITERS BLOCK AGAIN!!! :cry: :cry: Very Sad. :cry: I think its from movies and reading the other stories on here, it's messing me up. I was gonna write the next part but then I thought about a movie I saw and the first paragraph had nothing to do with Grarth and Draggneth, so I deleted it and have nothing new. Very sad isn't it?

Gone Camping. Be back in a few days. Hopefully I can thing of something for my next chapter. :-k :-k Anyways, READ MY STORY!!! lol

AHHH!! :ohnoes: :ohnoes: The Father could have grown a brain cell to run over there, save the kid, and get someone else to pull the lever. Plus, WHO IN THEIR RIGHT MIND WOULD LET A FOUR YEAR OLD ON TO THE TRAIN TRACKS???

Thats why I made it small. So its harder to read. Anyways, Ill be at camp until Sat-Sun so don't expect for a new part in my story to be posted. :(

Short, But good :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

Mmmm... Waffles!!! =P~ Level 300 Pancake Dragons!!! :ohnoes: :ohnoes: :ohnoes: Hmm... How do I make mithril dragons into food? The hidden sentence will answer this. (I like making secret messages :XD: )

Anyway isn't he on Holiday, and Xewleer if you are feeling really bored then I don't mind getting a bad review... lol nice rhyme :XD: And i don't mean it to be offensive. : : Read the secret message if you can find it. Its funny :mrgreen: Also, I don't know why I like using like 100 emotions in one sentence. Its probably a habit from msn.

Just a little tip: When writing on these forums, watch out for archimage_a! He bites!! :XD: jk

WOW! Greekoids much??? lol jk, Im actually Romanoid. I know alot about them and a little about the Greeks. Im more Romanoid than Greekoid. PS-I like adding "oid" to words im calling people. :D

If that wasn't there no one would know what the father did. If he risked his son's life or the 100s of people's. Its an ok ending but still should have jazzed it up a little. But what the heck this is your first story (thingy) here and this is the first time you've had to deal with archimage_a and the rest of the picky Tip.iters lol :XD:

Lol good story. Was it a nice house worth alot of money??? If it was, call me that noob :mrgreen: :mrgreen:

SEPHY COME BACK!!!!!! WE NEED YOUR GOOD COP REVIEWS!!! lol :pray: :pray: As for my story let Sephy review it as he already knows alot (or somewhat alot) about it, I like how he writes the reviews, and if somethings wrong he'll let you know nicely. Thanks :mrgreen: :mrgreen: Plus I like good cops better. PS- There is a hidden message somewhere in this post.

Thanks soooo much for my fix. It looks better :thumbsup: Just Wondering, Are my eyes dicieving(Spelt wrong I know) me or does your sig change from one to another everytime I refresh the page. How do you do that?? EDIT- Nope my eyes are fine. STILL HOW DO YOU DO THAT??? :? :? :?

Can one of you guys do this for me? I never got a reply. Still Waiting

nice. You guys are getting very popular. Maybe its the user bars? :XD: So ThruItAll hows my sig coming?

That was awsome. I like how youbased it on FMA which is on right now so ill keep this short. :D :D KEEP WRITING!!!

Chapter 3.2 - The Temple "Now, how do I get out?" He said to himself as he examined the room. There was a picture in the corner of the room. It was a Zamorak sign. But what was wierd about it was it looked like a door, but there was no door knobs or even hinges as he saw in the doctor's office. He walked up to it and noticed very small printing say BONES OF THE GREAT. This must have ment it needs the Greater Demon's bones to open. Grarth spent an hour getting the bones from the Greater Demon. When he finally had them he took them to the door, and lay them down on the floor just in front of it. The door started to open and what he saw next was the worst thing ever. He was in a temple with lava surrounding it. The bodies of his two friends lay on the floor, the murder weapon right beside them. It was another similar sword to Draggneth, but this one was a dagger. "NO! PLEASE NO!" Grarth yelled at the top of his lungs. Just as he yelled out he noticed three Tyras Guards coming into the room. Grarth, enraged now that he found his friends, pulled out Chaos Blade and sliced off two of the Tyras Guards' heads. After he disarmed the third Tyras Guard, Grarth asked him, "Where is King Tyras?" "I will never tell." Still angry about the murder, Grarth was in no mood for this. He quickly drew his sword and beheaded the Tyras Guard. As his head fell behind Grarth, due to the power of the strike, Grarth walked off to where the three had came from. He had an unwelcome surprise waiting for him outside the temple.

You can review chapter 2 in my story if you want. PS- Review my story by chapters. Im keeping track if it got better or worse (which i doubt :mrgreen: ) Meaning don't review everything i have posted. Just the next chapter or 2

Nice! =D> Its sounds good already : :thumbsup:

Nice sig Zack :) :)

Very :cry: :cry: