Kyle85

(As the title states, this is the first few paragraphs of a short story I am writing. It is supposed to be set during the collapse of the Roman Empire, but there are some parts that aren't historically accurate as I am writing this all from my head and there has been no research what so ever. All comments and criticism is welcome, but please no "IT SUKS!!!!11!!!!11111." That just not polite and only shows you are an iliterate brat. Also, if you notice the pace of the story changing really fast, or parts that should be described a little more, pm me them, I have a little problem when I am writing I always seem to get in a bit of a hurry and bad things happen to good stories. Enjoy!)

look at the helmet, he didnt even bother to add the lines of the face mask, he just shaded it in like the games does.

Holy crap man, that Jimi Hendrix sig is unbelievable. I only wish you were selling. I would buy that up in a heartbeat.

ill bid 160k

I really doubt you could make that in one click. Also, instead of making stupid little comments like this, why don't you actually use that thing sitting on your neck and give some constructive criticism? Anywho....The concept is alright, although I'm not really a big fan of grunge/gothic type sigs. But as the others have repeatedly said, it needs more color. When I say this I do not mean add in pinks and blues etc, but maybe different shades of grey and such. The background is really plain and boring, so my recommendation would be to find some tutorials and tailoring them to your needs, then mixing/matching, whatever until you find something you like and you feel confident in your skills enough to try to create something of your own creation. The text is pretty dull, and may contrast too much with the light parts of your sig.

Its too big to use on these boards. It needs about 50 pixels taken off from the width.

garuntee at least three more poeple will ask for one before he starts makin again.

itsa butter knife

I take it English and Grammer aren't your best subjects? Or perhaps not your first language? I am sorry, but I really hate it when people have horrible grammar, its my pet peeve.

ah, preschool, the only time I could sleep in school without gettin yelled at. Should have cherished those times

um you might wanna try and make different backgrounds cuz they are all the same.

I dont really like the border on each of them, but I like the 1st one.

Chicken, Id have to say that yours is the best so far. Its almost oo good.

is that supposed to be a river or the ocean? You might wanna clear that up a bit. And the guy needs a lot of work.

If that sword is an example of his great detailing, then hes not good at all.

maybe change the colors to some more halloween type colors. Not necessarily orange and black but just another color than blue or purplish. Oterwise, its probably one of the best halloween sigs ive seen.

look at the very first topic on this page. What do you see?

about my request, you can forget about it. I am going to try and make it myself.

about my request, you can forget about it. I am going to try and make it myself.

the shield, sword, arms, and hands all need to be bigger.

the shield, sword, arms, and hands all need to be bigger.

bump

bump

you should outline the ball and the word "PISTONS" in their red color. And they wont repeat, the cavs will knock em out in the second round.

you should outline the ball and the word "PISTONS" in their red color. And they wont repeat, the cavs will knock em out in the second round.