JimTheRev

'Sup man, I aint been on recently cause of my internet messing up, but it was working well enough for me to have a good read through your songs, ( The new ones atleast). All I can say is that A) I really did enjoy writing songs with you, and B) Keep up the good work bud :^_^: :wink: =D> Yours Awesomely, JimTheRev

cigarettes make you look cool? sense when? Since* and they don't, i smoke, and i don't feel as though it makes me cool, or "hard" as some of the chavs do down my street seems to think it does.... Stupid Chavs. Back onto topic now, Yeah my teacher at my school has one, she said it actually feels like your smoking, but without the initial tar, carbon monoxide and arsenic intake, which is in my opinion better, seeing as i play bombardment in my schools gym area alot, and i just get out of breath literately after the first 2 games. So i may invest in one of these.

Thanks... I'll probally name it something along the lines of that. And I just wrote a song in about 7 minutes...Hmm, I wonder if it's any good. *Hint hint* Oh, and me and you are so writing a song sometime together. Totally :D I live in the UK, so the time-zones are a bit different ( like 6 hours if you live in the USA) But yeah, I'm usually on most of the time Whenever you wanna start writing just pm or what ever. lol ~JimTheRev

Okay, Personal favourites are -: White Flags Circles Broken Promises Forgotten My World. As for the untitled one, I suggest calling it. something along the lines of " Your Damaging ", " Don't Try to Deny the Damage You've Done", or "Destroyed" Personally, I think that " Destroyed " would be more fitting, i like the untitled one aswell ^_^ ~JimTheRev

Advice taken, thanks for the feedback You made it sound better in my opinion, so you were probably singing it right :) I've changed it, and thanks for the help :) After I've posted this, i'll have a look at your new songs. Thanks, ~JimTheRev~

Thanks man :) I'll see what background vocals would work for the song. And you sure did inspire me to make this ( Kinda ) public :smile: I guess it was looking at the songs and seeing that I'm not the only one who kinda writes down his thoughts in song. So anyway, thanks dude. And keep on writing :)

I know i can't really say anything, due to my skill levels ( low ) but, I've gone around, asking people with like 99 strength, attack, defence, magic, slayer, "How long did it take you to get that? some more than others reply, " About 1500 zeal, " i stop and paused at that moment, cause i didnt know, what the heck zeal was, and said " what's zeal" He or she replies, " it's like pest control points, but its for soul wars", Anyway, just getting to the point now, since soul wars, i think the whole combat cape thing, has been ruined, No offence to the people who use soul wars as a easy way to level up skills. you can whine at me if you must, I'm just stating a point that me, and many people I've met, (who have actually got to 99 ( combat skill ) without soul-wars, basically, the old fashioned way. Thanks for taking your time for reading this. ~Jim

Okay, so thanks to Mrmegakirby, for giving me that kinda boost to make this. ( You were very inspirational >.>) and the credits go to my ex, as this was kinda made for her, and me, for having alot of spare time, and space to think. oh and actually writing the song :lol: ___________________ Screams Of Agony | ___________________ [hide] All this hurt that i felt, All this pain that was delt, Why did you destroy my life? Heck You were my life. Can we ever be the same? Maybe you could move on, If you just listen to this song. And remember the good times we had, and you'll never forget that life isnt always bad.... NO! All this time you had spent with me All this love you had felt for me It was never ment to be. And, the Screams Of Agony, They only seem to be. Aimed at me, from you. And Eventually, I will see. The love behind your eyes. Torn apart from every string of a memory, Life is just never gunna be the same, I'm going crazy. Just listen to me, listen to the sea. Listen to it making a quiet melody. Listen to it singing, good-bye to you and me. When i'm at school, i have to put on a fake smile. I try to laugh, but by the mile, That fake smile weighs me down, like a massive burden. When will this ever actually become the end. Laughing is not laughing if your like me. Sometimes life gets to much to be. (Woahhh) The Screams Of Agony, They only seem to be. Aimed at me, from you. And Eventually, I will see. The love behind your eyes. Do you know what it's like to hurt. Obviously, it's like having, dirt. Thrown in your eyes. Kicking and screaming, everything in life seems to despise. Me, and everything that was to be. Sitting near the empty rooftop Waiting on someone to make the pain stop I realise, life is for living not for crying. Life is also for truth, not for lying. So i get up, brush my self down. And i turn the frown, upside-down. And blow away, the screams. And get out of the bad dreams. [/hide] _________ I Lay Here | _________ [hide] When we broke up, It Brought pain to my heart Knowing theres nothing I can do, cause we are apart. Also knowing that it wasn't that long. What's to become? Departing over the land, Tears are leaving my eyes, Knowing that the further away I am. It seems to be, the better off I'll be. What will the last word in the sentence be? You or me? I lay here Wishing that you'd whisper in my ear. " Everythings gunna to be okay." " We just have to wait another day." ( When will that day come, What have i ever done? ) There is only so many Hours in a day. I sit on msn, tryna work out what to say. Wondering if it will have an effect. Wondering if what i say will just get deflect Or if it will ever be heard, even after said. Sitting on my bed, withn the same thing runnin' through my head. Your happiness was my endeavor. I know it wasn't really clever. If i was to stand up and fight my emotions. I know that I may aswell, try and swim all the oceans. But you know I'd do that for you. Torn apart from every day in my life. I got to stop living in strife. Leave behind everything in my memory. I listen to the wind making a melody. I lay here, Wishing that you'd whisper in my ear. " Everythings going to be okay." " We just have to wait another day." (Everything seems to be going my way) Wishing that conflict never happened. Wishing that i could apprehend. A beginning or an end. But still Wishing that my life would never end. Waiting on someone to save me from this hell. Seeming that nothings goin' my way. Waiting for you to tell me " Everythings gunna be okay". Running away from every form of life. Wanting that last piece of love again. Wishing that I could forever contain, My anger, it's something i hate. Everyone seems to debate, That I have it under control But I feel i still have to pay the death toll. I lay here Wishing that you'd whisper in my ear. " Everythings going to be okay." " We just have to wait another day." (Just another day) As I stand in the shower. For about an hour, I realise, that living without a hi from you. Is something i'll never be able to do. I'm so close to you, But so far away too. What is there for me to do? I'm trying to understand why, I have to try, And realise that harmony, Is having you next to me. I say good-bye. But I never mean for the last time. So sing along with me. Cause when were together were in our prime. And I'll love you, 'till the end of time. I lay here..... [/hide]

Confessions, I dye my hair, I still play pokemon. I smoke. Regrets, dying my hair blonde. ( it's black now >.> ) Secrets, I still like my ex :( ( I dumped her, so she hates me now....), I went out with my best mate's girl when he was going out with her, but he don't know, so I'm just dreading the day he finds out. :ohnoes:

Until The Day I Die by Story Of The Year

I just have to say this, You sir, are a very good songwriter, I read all the lyrics, sorta did my own singing to it, and stuff, and even in my voice, it sounds exceptional, I just cannot explain how brilliant, and even, touching the lyrics are, I just cannot explain how good they are, you sir, get two thumbs up =D> :thumbsup: =D> And i'd say it 100 more times, but dont want to get banned from this forum for spamming :-P :smile: it is brilliant. Oh and i forgot, Kirby ftw :mrgreen: