Earth

True. And the reason why I called it a hatchery is because it sorta is.. The main fabricator makes the asteroids (Eggs, basically) and then another ship mines it, with mini robots/ships (drones) take the kT to the Asgard (Hive center).

Nex, the mass replicator is just named as a hatchery for easier rememberance.. Although just the Mass Production whatever is a better idea, with mini ships carrying the kT and something that stripmines the asteroids after they are prooduced is a great idea.

Well, we could research it. I'm saying it could be usefull, which it will be once I get it up and running.

... You just don't get it do you? I can use the mech hatcheries to make asteroids, which mean KT, which mean recources. More suefull than giant robot target dummies.

NEX. They produce kT by using the sun, which means we can have an unlimited source of recources. That does not mean replicators.

... I'm stilll going to research those mechanical asteroid hatcheries, they're too usefull IMO.

I was just asking. Hell, it could be a mechanical hatchery, and make robotic transport drones to deliver the kT to the Asgard.

Jremiah, I have a better Idea for the hatcheries.. How about they generate asteroids, or just kT using the suns energy?

Well, I'm one, charecter name is Earth.

Lynx, how about.. ''The dungeoneers tales."?

A couple of things that I would change 1.) To much use of names. In real life do you adress somebody by there first name when they're having a conversation? When your panicking because a building is collapsing and your friend is going to die do you waste time saying names? By adding the names you have sllowed down the entire paragraph. I would rework the speech, removing the names in an attempt to speed it up. 2.) If I opened a book and read this what would I think? If you want to make it appear like a gripping story try adding some metaphors, similies, adjectives and some heavy description. At the moment "A portal opened in the Worldstone Chamber. The two girls hugged each other as the room shook." does the job but it doesn't make it fun to read, its a very utalitarian statement. 3.) Names are a bit stupid, Emerald and Shadow? There not even names. Try and draw attention to a character through there action, by having ridiculous names the story crys CLICHE!. Also don't focus on the eyes ever. Just say eyes, never put description into eyes ever its just something you shouldn't do. In real life people don't pay attention to eyes they pay attention to the face as a whole. My responses to Resitences suggesestions: 1. When do you not use someones name in a situation? Any situation? I've had several problems with just calling someone 'dude' and calling the entirely wrong person over. So, the Names are quite fine IMO. 2. True, many times I find descriptive imagry usefull in order to keep me with the stories flow, but theres a fine line between good use of those writers essentials and absolute obesity of them. 3. Again, the names are quite fine. This is a sect of some sort, using magic, and absed off of D&D and Dungeoneering. And the names aren't Cliche, they may lack a little originality, but they aren't so widely used to be a cliche. The eyes are actually great, because studying someones eyes is a good way to know their intentions, and to 'pass a message' which may or may not corispond with words. Focusing on the eyes is perfectly acceptable so lon gas it isn't 'eyes eyes eyes eyes everywhere'.

I'll attept to stab it, But I highly doubt i'd do much good.

Thassa long list.. And. .Time travel, Seriously?

The ones to the nroth are Enigma and Harmony.. That one sucking life from everything is probably what killed Creation and Manipulation.

Charecter: Earth Skillset: 86% light 1 and 23% crafting 1 and 50% geomancey 11 and 3% nature 3 and 43% axes 1 and 70% telepathy 50% alchemy 70% dodging 10% unarmed 1 and 10% healing 40 % foraging items: building tools. Kick ass robes. Gloves given by Harmony Cloak given by Enigma.

I upgraded it because it would have been useless otherwise.. And Retech would have to obey you and your sometimes unreasonable demands.

Mather, it is technically of my make and Techies make, since I upgraded the core, and he upgraded the body past scrapness. You made the original, but he constructed an entirely different sort of bot.

Not your scrapbot anymore... And that list of protocols is very, very limited.

Ross, I only tampered because Retech should be able to make charecter decicions for himself, Chi forcibly re-installed the 'Obey Chi' stuff. He can make another scrap bot if he wants.

Sounds cool. Though I'll only be advancing my Psionics in order to acess more thoguht based tech. It's proven to be incredibly usefull.... Sometimes.

Easily, since Faust would just stun you with Psionics.. Or something. I just like to build, repair, and stab things.

And there's no chance to upgrade BonSai's security. I'm going to ask, to ASK him if I can install some stun weapons on him. Then research a control tank so he doesn't have to be on a cart.

You think AI's have a bad track record?... Well, they do, but I think i've done worse. Personally, I've managed to unleash a biological/mechanical, sun fed abomonation with a hammer, blow up a ship I was trying to repair, ruin relations with several countries (I cannot remember how though), set fire to an alien base with plasma, and caused hilarious deaths with gravity related weaponry. And then blow up another ship.

Okay then, build first, stab later, then work on biological mind control gun.

Wall levels up from revival 63HP