Welcome to the forums. :) Not bad for a first try, though maybe you should consider muting your RuneScape music while recording. I could hear both the newbie melody you're playing as well as the area's songs. Having a loop of the newbie melody also (to me anyway) doesn't make it very exciting. Yeah, I only realised its on untill I played it back on my laptop. (my pc doesnt have speakers yet only just built it). I placed the melody in so I can cover up the speed up parts. Im also learning how to fade better. (pretty new to this)