Not going to lie to you, I didn't really enjoy the video. You seem to be very good at pking but the video editing was quite bad. You need to stop trying to make the video look good and just leave it for people to watch you kill him. Like Quyneax said, alot of people want to watch from start to finish what you have done, so you running over to him, attacking him, all the way through to you killing him and seeing your loot. Also, don't make the screen flash white just before a big hit, because every time it did that I thought you was going to another clip and then I saw you hit high and I was like oh. When the video had finished I felt very confused and didn't realise massively what had just happened. In my opinion, I'd say 4/10. I hope this has helped!