Lancelot586

yea i gotta agree with mxm terly's is a good pixel and teenageloser's is a good non pixel but if i had to vote between the 2 id prob pic teenagelosers.

lol i see someones seen hitchhikers guide- or read for the matter but anyways nice style you got there! wish i could do something like that!

i think it doesnt look like hes holding the sword

I think im ok with drawing bgs (not the best) but when it comes to people, weapons, MAINLY BOOTS, etc. I suck... can someone help me?

hey archamfr do u have a runescape acount named puremfr and maybe even a few numbers after that? i used to have someone with that sort of name on my friends list...

I hate ppl who try to sell other peoples hard work and effort. Your wrote:" "Hopefully I'm not wrong bout the sig *Embarassed* " No thats Mxms work lol no doubt

lol clever idea to hidng it but.. looks too much like a toga in my oppion. good idea but how about instead of that put a robe over part of the pl8 and the legs?

it looks like an old man...

lol well not at the momment. Of course you could just get rid of it but it wouldnt look that nice. Have you considered just making the underpants looking part more of the pl8? I dont know if that would look cool but give it a try!

Hey you know what would be cool? If you make the zammy guys magic glow (using animation)

ya its not that bad but it looks way too much like mario style. I would just think a pixeler would come up with his own style...

wow thats really bad... no offense but it looks like something u would see in paper mario lol

ya ditch the castle... or since thats a beware sign put it outside a pub lol thats what i would do.

lol ur right it does look like underpants but actually thats part of the pl8 mail. At least i think it is.

his arms r deformed...

a few ppl have that kind of sig already :P

ya the mystic guy is a bit out of wack but otherwise its great! but i cant figure out what shes holding in her hand.

well I dont know much to say about it because its reslly just practice... it kind of looks like a whip is her tail or something but ya. The white outlining makes it hard to see. Shes kind of like gumbi lol cause she really doesnt have much bone work. Her chest is a little messed up. Is she wearing shoes? Dont try to do each strand of hair because it ends up looking a bit messed up. Anyways this is just practice for you so its not that bad. (o)(o) \___/ this is a cool face!

Ya try to get about 1 more page of cc before shading it. Anyways sorry i wrote sara instead of Zammy lol i just want sara REALLY badly so ive lost my mind. Anways I love what you did to the cape! everything you changed made it look 10 times better. But now that I look at it for the second time i see a few more things wrong with it. Like monky said you need to work on the zammy guys face a bit more. instead of making his face gray you should make it only a really dark tan under his hood but have his chin be a normal tone. (so that it looks like the Hood is shading SOME of his face) Also the zammy guys cape is a bit flat now that i can see it a little better. I also think you should make the gloves and boots come over the armour instead of in them. Ok thats all I noticed with the zammy guy now about the sara gold trimmed guy... His Hair is a bit odd but if thats the way you want it to look thats fine. I would just think it would be cooloer if it was wacky lol :). and the bg needs a lil bit of work but I think you should work on that once you start shading. O ya i forgot to say the abbysal whip looks great! i can see its wrapped around the sword several times now.

you made the hill with the sign on top very well! But the caslte isnt working for me. It kind of looks like its a flat billboard. Try showing other sides of the castle in your picture.

Just a few things wrong with this picture. I noticed that the zammy guy has a cape but its not very noticable because its brown like the ground. Try giving him a sara cape from the mage arena, that should be noticable. Also the zammy guy has a hood over his head as i noticed but why is his face gray? I like the idea of red eyes though. Also with the zammy guy his abyssal whip is twirled around the other guys dragon long but I suggest you make it look like its wrapped around the sword several times. You tryed to but it didnt exactly work. (making the whip dark purple and dark red stripes would help it because then the black outlining would make it more clear.) Also the rune gold guys cape is very undemensional When something is in the air like that make sure you show part of the other side too. The rune gold guy is also a bit short on facial expression... MAKE HIM FREAKED OUT LIKE HE KNOWS HES ABOUT TO DIE!!!!! lol he kinda of looks like he's smiling. thats just my oppion though. Im looking forward to seeing your work when its finished :)

It lacks in demension... Like for ex: the mystic clothes is practically flat like a cartoon. Also you can hardly notice the door and handle.

Ok Ill open up a BG tutorial because seeing yours I think somebody needs to... Anyways a few tips use paints line tools!

np and thanks for gettin my name out :D

is this what your looking for? if it is can you say "edited by Lancelot586" just so my name gets out... thx