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oK, nice improvements but: More colors for shading,. I said this on another thread: Use more than 3 colors (dark green, regular and light green) Use LOTS (like 6) different shades. Also, looks like the chick has a fro :lol: Make the hair smaller <-----> that ways, and longer. And put the purple p hat on top or, with less slant, on the head.

Nice mate, very nice. I like the simplicity, yet complexity both in one. No complex shading/patterns, but its really intricate. I'm loving it man. P.S. My arm is waaaay beefier than that ;) XD I dig the pic :) 8/10

I'd play some bass lines for a midi for a karaoke :D Bubsa, I respect you for using a somewhat writing talent to make us laugh :D You rule mate. You can hang with meh and Sir alex anytime mate. (We're the Noob artists ;P, not noob pixellator, MXM owns our souls but....) Yeah I'm done ranting now.

he's holding the pick axe wrong, and the man needs more shading. 3 color chading is NOT the way to go, grasshoppa. Add some colors in between, maybe some red on the shirt because of the furnace's light.

hell, maybe even I'll enter. Take a break from explaining perspective to idiots on my thread XD

Terley, you can be in my posse anyday XD It's a lost cause, explaining perspective to these people. The people who understand my art's perspective are the ones who like it, and they're the ones I WANT to like it. I don't expect a 5 year old (Tenz) to understand it because his meek little mind can't perceive my art.

Btw, ROFL. You couldn't tell I had a shark in my signature when, less than 2 days ago you drew THREE sharks. I will not hold any biases against you for flaming my art, so I will give you a 3/10 for trying. You need to shade, you need to use less black lines, and you need to use a REAL font. You can work on your style by drawing people. People are the most diversely shaded things on earth, judging by facial expressions, size, and shape, they can be shaded and drawn in many different styles. Keep trying, and NEVER say "Only nice posts pl000z" because then, people will make fun of you. Also, without the mean criticism, you'd never learn and people would only lie to you and you'd always believe you were a wonderful artist, when actually, people despise your work.

I love you in a straight way my friend. *drools all over the computer while I look at siggeh* Anyways, my only two critiques are: Guy on the right needs cheek implants, his face seems SLIGHTLY choppy around the eye and cheek bone maybe extend a pixel or two to make him more... hardy... If that even makes sense there. My second comment is that the rune boots need to be more rune-y on the left guy. More toe, less ankle. Again, you and your art own my soul out of sheer wow-factor.

Thanks Rhys, you rule :) To Other noob who insulted my work: You need to learn the basic rules of art, perspective, surface, and light source, then maybe you can critique me. Oh and while you're busy learning, maybe also study what animals Have FINS, not stupid grey swirled blob things. Please avoid critiquing things your small brain cannot understand. Also, know who you're starting a fight with, because I consider myself an intellectual, and by your writing, I consider you a monosyllabic ape :) Have a nice day.

The sharky was A) Killed, B) Punched in the kidney reeeally hard or C) has a urinary track infection. OWIE he pee's blood... or drank too much kooooolaid.

ummm, very bland on the outside, but I like the concept. Maybe add trees, rock, anything to the sides. Work on maybe making the people large because as of now, they are very small and not the focus so much of the sig. 6/10 because it needs some work and is very empty

This is the final, no more key, because idiots STILL didn't understand the bloody concept. For all of those who do understand and compliment my work, I thankyou. Everyone else who says "He's a giants, what's toffee? whats the swirl thats grey and stupid looking!?" just.... Ew Is all I have to say.

Its called perspective!! He is JUMPING OFF A CLIFF for a p hat, thus he appears must larger because he is closer to the screen! Agh I added the border earlier and am uploading as we speak.

FINISHED!

ok peoples, this is my semi-finished piece. I need a little more critiquing and It will be finished, then I will tamper with it some mor ebecause I never can make it look right. Like Pixelling OCD kinda... Yeah

you do realize its a PAPER party hat right? Paper can be blown away in the wind (the little swoosh) and the man is not falling yet. He has JUST jumped off the cliff and is beginning to learn the laws of gravity. and Terley: You kick wagon O_O thank you sooo much for the help all you guys, specially terley. I moved the building to the shoreline. It's a bed and breakfast now ;D I'm adding a fountain, flowers along the path, and color to the lkast 2 buildings. I think again, this';ll be great :D

edit: the white line on the left is fixed and realized that the man is hard to see with the building below, so i'm moving that building.... or the man

UPDATED A LOT! yay it's near almost finishing... I figure I'll get it done, gather some advice and then really complete it. So, for now, give any advice/criticism.

thanks guys for all the help :D I have a feeling this will be a great sig and improve my skill greatly. I'm back from california and i hope my cousin dies. He's 6 and acts 3 and is spoiled and manipulates everyone. ridiculous, the kid still drinks from a bottle.

you officially own my soul. 9/10

beh, bump. Away in cali. BYE you suck...

Rawr, dude. perspective. He's going to be FALLING towards the boat. More like falling towards the city, but whateva. I'm working now before I leave tomorrrrrow

I ahve a feeling this is gonna be a new standard for my sigs :D I'm really excited, but I'm leaving for camp, then california for 3 SOLID weeks. I'm depressed about that, but have reason to come back for this :) I wat this to be my best sig. and The beach took FOREVER btw ;)

what the... who the... ew... wow... *dies from over thinking* Dude, 1st: What the hell is it. 2nd: You need to clean up lineart 3rd: i like the colors 4th: the buttcrack scares meh

Uh, no. The shield is pointed in the direction of the GD, and he looks like he's in a defensive stance.