mario_sunny

Glad you liked it :3> first: use home teleport, the bank is ten seconds away second: use home teleport, the bank is ten seconds away. Ecto is about 20, it doesn't cut into your time by a significant amount.

Creepy... never heard of this bug before. So you say you scored right as the game ended?

:shock: Creepy... gets the readers attention. 9/10. Some places you need to be a bit more descriptive. I did not catch one spelling or grammar mistake. GREAT start, I look foward to reading more. :mrgreen:

*yawns* Tired. Might write some more tonight though. Your sig looks a little... weird... mind if you tell me what it says and I'll try to fix it? EDIT: Tried to make out the words... here it is. I kept the background color. [url=http://imageshack.us][img=http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/3734/varrocklibraryja1.png][/url] The actual link to the Varrock Library isn't on there yet though.

Must... BUMP!

I don't really expect people too anyway, it's quite a long story. Thanks for the comment :D

What about agility working in f2p? The higher agility you have the faster it replinishes. It isn't really considered an item, but it still is something from p2p that works in f2p. Has jagex official said the glory amulet has no effect? Maybe it does. :o

Vambs actually do not give any mage defense, last time I checked. Trust. You can't trust anyone in the wilderness. That's not a good idea.

First of all, I never mentioned anything about wanting castle wars to not be realistic. Go ahead, make it realistic. All I want is a few more features for low levels. Second of all, I never mentioned anything about the low levels wanting to have 'fun', more options for low levels would give them more opprotunities to help the team. Third of all, I never mentioned anything about wanting this update to come quickly. I have a strange feeling you didn't even read my post :shame:

I've always heard rants concerning low levels and their uselessness in the minigame Castle Wars. *Most* low levels actually try to help, but it may seem as they no use to the team. This is not true. I believe it is not their fault, it is jagex's fault. My suggestion? Jagex needs to make more options in castle wars than just operating a catapult that can hit teammates. They just get totally clobbered if they try anything else(capturing flag, fighting off foes, ect.). I suggest jagex include more features for the poor low levels in castle wars. Currently I have no suggestions, but I am very open for some. I suggest jagex makes something that doesn't hit fellow teammates. :x Now in some cases, there are low levels that tend to think its funny to watch their fellow allies get owned by a flying rock, but *most* of the 'newbs' there just want to help.

I suggest being more descriptive in some parts, but overall 7/10. Good start.

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So you want me to change that to 'terribly' and the other to 'super terribly'? Something like that? :-s How about Super-Duper-Worse-Than-A-Swarm-of-begging-noobs-wrong? : you win. :wink:

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. Get a new keyboard. :P . So you want me to change that to 'terribly' and the other to 'super terribly'? Something like that? :-s

Yes they know something is wrong at the vomit but do they know it's terribly wrong? :-s

Chapter four up \

Very well written, very very well written. I love the way you grasped the reader's attention with this charming short story... and it had a good moral! :D I had to hesitate with it a bit... but I really do think you deserve a 10/10. GOOD JOB! :mrgreen:

Loved the ending :) , will you continue? It was a bit odd how you switched the mood suddenly by mentioning certain things like 'jagex' and 'highscores'. :? 9/10

The switching storylines was kinda suppose to show their life in a day of work, but I thought it would be dull if I just put Daughin's in one whole chuck then Charles in a whole chunk. I'm sure it would bore the reader. Arg... I'm gonna re-read the whole thing soon and get those spelling mistakes. Thanks for reminding me :) Soon my friend, soon... Thanks for the er... rating :D !!!!!111!1!shiftplusone!!!!eleven!!1!11!!!!!

The ending of your poems is what I relish the most "forever unloved..." Keep up the good work :thumbsup:

Hehe... too many stouts there? :) Thanks for the compliment :mrgreen:

Thanks :mrgreen: As for the spelling mistakes... sorry about those(I'm glad I didn't misspell 'mistake' again :( ). I'll re-read the whole story soon and get rid of em. Ooooh a rating, thanks again :D

Thanks :mrgreen:

nice quad lag :) , you really had me going that five people had replied to my story. Oh well, at least I got a reader. :mrgreen: Thanks for the comliment, and it's not really suppose to make sense yet, I just started the story(trying to develop the characters).

roffles! =D> :lol: :mrgreen: