Iban_Master

Pretty nice I enjoyed it quite a bit. It was very weird, but no scary. How did the White Knights become zombies if Joe was the first one there? :?

2/10 It had a lot of SPAG (spelling, punctuation, and grammar) errors. Never put the numeral of of a number if it is under ten. (Unless in Addresses, phone numbers, license plates, and things like that) One more little thing my self is one word. Myself. If he is new how did he learn to just go and smelt them.

I am not much of a poetry guy, I am more of a writer. I guess it is okay. I don't know much poetry.

I don't remember really. I believe it was something like. . . I have know idea. But I am almost sure it was a Black Knight ot White Knight.

I have to agree as well. If it was not a hacker, I would be thinking "hes wacked".