just started on it and put lozza work on the detail in the fire,own creation;)

 

 

 

you guys like it so far?

 

 

 

 

 

 

update!

 

 

 

 

 

 

and another one!

 

 

 

Nice fire! Hopefully you'll add some glow/diffuse on it before finishing.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Lines looks solid, but the character looks a bit like a Muppet. :?: Also, be sure to clean up your linework before colouring. Right now your current sig's outlines are a bit problematic. See the linework and soft outlines tutorials.

ty! ye i'm workin on the char atm;)

 

 

 

and yup have read some guides and concentratin fully on shade and linework atm

Use satured colours in the fire! :o

fire is to round. make some more different big flames, not just 1 big flame, because i think this isn't a flamethrower that try's to burn it owner isn't it? further not realy much to comment on atm :wink:

use a more saturated and darker red for the fire

tyvm,but i don't think i'll make any further changes on the fire,i like it,updates the person(me)

update added

change the hat, it doesnt fit the guy, and if you wanna keep it use less saturated colors for it

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

otherwise it looks promising :thumbsup:

The angle of the river isn't right. The way it is made now the water is higher then the person sitting so all the water should be gone by now... :? I dont have the time for an exemple now but ill try it later.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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i see what you mean,i'll try some stuff out