rate my w.i.p pixel

[tilly]

just started on it and put lozza work on the detail in the fire,own creation;)

 

 

 

you guys like it so far?

 

 

 

 

 

 

update!

 

 

 

 

 

 

and another one!

 

 

 

[venomai]

Nice fire! Hopefully you'll add some glow/diffuse on it before finishing.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Lines looks solid, but the character looks a bit like a Muppet. :?: Also, be sure to clean up your linework before colouring. Right now your current sig's outlines are a bit problematic. See the linework and soft outlines tutorials.

[tilly]

ty! ye i'm workin on the char atm;)

 

 

 

and yup have read some guides and concentratin fully on shade and linework atm

[Lovelydude]

Use satured colours in the fire! :o

[rik]

fire is to round. make some more different big flames, not just 1 big flame, because i think this isn't a flamethrower that try's to burn it owner isn't it? further not realy much to comment on atm :wink:

[LeonardMart]

use a more saturated and darker red for the fire

[tilly]

tyvm,but i don't think i'll make any further changes on the fire,i like it,updates the person(me)

[tilly]

update added

[LeonardMart]

change the hat, it doesnt fit the guy, and if you wanna keep it use less saturated colors for it

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

otherwise it looks promising :thumbsup:

[rik]

The angle of the river isn't right. The way it is made now the water is higher then the person sitting so all the water should be gone by now... :? I dont have the time for an exemple now but ill try it later.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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[tilly]

i see what you mean,i'll try some stuff out