The crying soul of a friend lost in the ways of life, The painful memory of time unable to turn it back, The Heart bleeds, but the soul is strong, He was a friend for years, but not a good one for long, The poisonous dagger stabbing the feelings of a friend, A fax, a mail or a letter he could have send, But he left with the wind without saying goodbye, His last words: we'll be friends till the day we die.

 

 

 

I heard a Cry for help, But from who?. I wondered if it was my long lost friend, thought about it for many days and nightÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s, but I just couldnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t get the answer, Until One day, a day like no other days. It was ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¹ÃâhimÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ The friend that I hadnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t spoken to for years. I Thought to Myself this cannot be ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ but it was.

 

He said ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅI am sorry my friend for leaving you, all the years without a letter, email, or post, I am truly sorryÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

Quite good, though you'll want to clean up your punctuation, its very important for good poetry. Also you might want to change your line breaks.

Oi! I never really like poetry but I think its very good! and I noticed very few punctuation mistakes...

Yer, I am really bad At English tbh, No Offence to the english people though, But I dispise the language itself. Even though I'm welsh.. I think in welsh and I speak it 7 hours a day, so It's quite hard.

 

 

 

I'll try and sort it out =]

Yer, I am really bad At English tbh, No Offence to the english people though, But I dispise the language itself. Even though I'm welsh.. I think in welsh and I speak it 7 hours a day, so It's quite hard.

 

 

 

I'll try and sort it out =]

 

 

 

Yes I heard English is a very hard language to learn, I asked a couple of Spanish-speaking people once. I realize we have so many exceptions upon exceptions with words and sentences it gets very confusing.

 

 

 

Overall good poem, it was nice. Mentioned earlier, it could use some fixing up.