April 10, 200719 yr This is a paper that I just finished writing about Tomas Kalnoky, the lead singer for the band Streetlight Manifesto. I'm not really proud of it or anything, I just think it's pretty informative and I enjoyed writing it a lot. I love the music and I love what he does, I think people should know about it. :P I want to encourage you to at least read the fourth paragraph where he has some of my favorite quotes. With a Golden Heart Comes a Rebel Fist: Tomas Kalnoky Tomas Kalnoky started to drift into the music world around the year 1995, and up until now, he has made such a dramatic impact on music itself and the people who listen to it. Whether itÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s the lyrical content of his music, or the completely revolutionized style of it, he never ceases to amaze the people who have heard him. It all started for him with a band that he and his friends created when he was about fourteen, the band was called GIMP. From there, he began his writing career. Specifically, he wrote a song called ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅSupernothingÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâà Ghost: I am prejudice towards ignorance, so that would explain why I appear to be so.
April 10, 200719 yr It would be better if you expanded on his quotes a little more and looked into the meaning of them rather than just saying "this is my faovurite quote" and stuff... Mercifull <3 Suzi "We don't want players to be able to buy their way to success in RuneScape. If we let players start doing this, it devalues RuneScape for others. We feel your status in real-life shouldn't affect your ability to be successful in RuneScape" Jagex 01/04/01 - 02/03/12
April 10, 200719 yr Author Yeah, I kinda wanted to but it had a maximum page limit, and I hit it. :( Ghost: I am prejudice towards ignorance, so that would explain why I appear to be so.
April 10, 200719 yr Take some quotes out and add more analysis. Mercifull <3 Suzi "We don't want players to be able to buy their way to success in RuneScape. If we let players start doing this, it devalues RuneScape for others. We feel your status in real-life shouldn't affect your ability to be successful in RuneScape" Jagex 01/04/01 - 02/03/12
April 10, 200719 yr Author I'll definitely consider that, this is a first draft afterall, so I can't worry too much about it. I'm in school right now, next hour in AP English Language (The class that I wrote it for) we are going to be Peer Revising I think. But I'll definitely look into doing more analysis of the quotes rather than listing more. If you want to show me any ones that you think aren't really needed in it, that would be cool. I'm biased and I like all of the quotes equally. :P Ghost: I am prejudice towards ignorance, so that would explain why I appear to be so.
April 10, 200719 yr I dont really know much about the guy but if you write a little bit about each quite first then discard the ones you cant really write much about and then expand on the others you should end up with the most meaningful quotes and the most in depth analysis of the quotes that are left Mercifull <3 Suzi "We don't want players to be able to buy their way to success in RuneScape. If we let players start doing this, it devalues RuneScape for others. We feel your status in real-life shouldn't affect your ability to be successful in RuneScape" Jagex 01/04/01 - 02/03/12
April 10, 200719 yr Author Ah, good idea. Thanks for the help. :) Ghost: I am prejudice towards ignorance, so that would explain why I appear to be so.
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