99 Hunter Pixel Sig ~ Ideas?

[cool75155]

hey guys, I asked many people if they could make a hunter pixel for me with nobody saying yes so I have decided to make my own. I have some pixel experience so it should be alright.

 

 

 

Here are some extremely basic outlines (not even linework) of what it will look like any ideas, suggestions, comments?

 

 

 

 

 

 

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[Sharcoth]

Can you explain what it is going to be? I can't really tell from the sketch but it looks like there is a turtle and an explosion? I like that there's the skill cape in there though :)

[cool75155]

Hunter skillcape, throwing a red chinchompa (what all good hunters hunt).

 

They blow up...yes I know it's odd but they do.

[tomdavies90]

perspective is pretty off, the box trap looks like it's on a 70 degree hill

[LeonardMart]

not sure but i thought that hunter capes are brown :-k

[cool75155]

No that's the best hubter colour I could get.

 

I know the box trap is off perspective but that's kinda on purpose, I like the way it looks. Otherwise id make it look more likt eh ones on my avatar.

[majin_buu139]

damn awesome! that is gonna look good when its done

[majin_buu139]

awesome sig maker bro!

[Nazgul740]

flat, anatomy issues, horrific clouds...

 

 

 

You really really need linework help... :?

[cool75155]

Care to help then.

[MoeSzyslak]

Not a real good artist when it comes to making these... but I can give some criticism. I think it looks good, but the only thing is it kinda looks like the character is just lobbing the chinchompa, doesn't look like he's giving a real windup or an aggressive approach...maybe have his other arm kinda outward? But meh, that's just what I think of it, it's your sig, and I do like it otherwise :)