April 25, 200719 yr Just started this tonight, from a lineart I made about a year ago. >_< Crits and comments please. Edit: Not sure if it's an improvement, but it's an experiment. @_@ My sister wanted to watch me pixel :lol: Took me five minutes. Update: Still heaps to do.
April 26, 200719 yr it went from manly running man to elf girl casting a bubble spell lolz At the moment i can't really see the full form of the muffin.
April 26, 200719 yr Are you going to keep the black lines? :-s It's not bad; I don't have much to comment on, sorry. - Np Tyler
April 26, 200719 yr I'm not saying it's perfect..but people at Tip.It are so weird! You people say that other guy's (and girl's) first time pieces are pretty good when they're crap, but when you see real art, you say meh! What's up with that!!! Back on topic.. Her hands and arms are somewhat different sizes..the whole bubble thing is weird lol...I like the pose and the anatomy (besides the arms) look pretty good! I have a problem with the black lines..I'm sure you will get rid of them, but if you are not, PLEASE DO!! It honestly does take away from how great this piece can be. The colors on the dress hurt my eyes but it's probably because the background is pink, lol...if you don't change that, ima kill ya!! :twisted: do u wow?Cassiius|Level 70 Night Elf Preist|RunetotemSambora|Level 37 Tauren Shaman|BurningLegion
April 27, 200719 yr Author I'm not saying it's perfect..but people at Tip.It are so weird! You people say that other guy's (and girl's) first time pieces are pretty good when they're crap, but when you see real art, you say meh! What's up with that!!! Back on topic.. Her hands and arms are somewhat different sizes..the whole bubble thing is weird lol...I like the pose and the anatomy (besides the arms) look pretty good! I have a problem with the black lines..I'm sure you will get rid of them, but if you are not, PLEASE DO!! It honestly does take away from how great this piece can be. The colors on the dress hurt my eyes but it's probably because the background is pink, lol...if you don't change that, ima kill ya!! :twisted: I totally agree with your first statement ;P I was glad to finally get some feedback ;D I agree about her hands and arms, I think that her right arm requires a whole redo, I would appreciate and edit from anyone who thinks they could improve, because I have tried and failed ;P I'll be fixing the dress, I only spent a minute on it before I posted ;P Also, the bg will be transparent.
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