Meh lazy as i am when my internet goes down for 3 days i end up pixeling...

 

 

 

comments and such c\c welcome... don't comment on the facial anatomy or ill skin you alive :x ... No edits on teh first drawing plox, i forgot to pop some clothes on her :oops:

 

 

 

 

 

 

if this is a pirate sig i prommise i will kill you

 

good job tho

 

fix the hair in the middle

if this is a pirate sig i prommise i will kill you

 

good job tho

 

fix the hair in the middle

 

 

 

no need its not a pirate sig :wink: hair in the middle do you mean that one spot of brown right dere --> points

the position of the girl is weird, like shes leaning on an invisible wall, i dont know. the BG confuses me but im sure its because its not finished.

 

 

 

FACIAL ANATOMY IS WRONG!

 

*runs away while being chased by nazgul whos wielding a knife ready to skin me alive*

 

 

 

jk, i also got problems with anatomy, and not only with the face mehehe. in my current pixel wip i put a giant hood on my character to avoid having to draw eyes :P

the position of the girl is weird, like shes leaning on an invisible wall, i dont know. the BG confuses me but im sure its because its not finished.

 

 

 

FACIAL ANATOMY IS WRONG!

 

*runs away while being chased by nazgul whos wielding a knife ready to skin me alive*

 

 

 

jk, i also got problems with anatomy, and not only with the face mehehe. in my current pixel wip i put a giant hood on my character to avoid having to draw eyes :P

 

 

 

Well see the position of the girl is sopposed to be running from a murderious band of thugs who she just stole teh money sack from... The facial anatomy is he looking over her shoulder...

 

 

 

 

Bit of an update, not sure if im gonna keep it

what i mean is that the hair looks verry unnatural

 

no ones hair ever parted exactly perfect like that

 

and it a tad puffy

 

yea sry

what i mean is that the hair looks verry unnatural

 

no ones hair ever parted exactly perfect like that

 

and it a tad puffy

 

yea sry

 

 

 

Your right, and since she is running i guess it should be more wind blown also... Ill get to work on it... :

Her head looks like it's like a triangle... The tops of people's heads are supposed to be rounded...not flat. She's seriously supposed to be running?? I'm sorry, but I don't see it.. It looks more like she's leaning too far and drunk.. You can do better.

She has no forehead. =\

Her head looks like it's like a triangle... The tops of people's heads are supposed to be rounded...not flat. She's seriously supposed to be running?? I'm sorry, but I don't see it.. It looks more like she's leaning too far and drunk.. You can do better.

 

 

 

:sigh: yeah i've been looking over the anatomy and right now im kinda ticked that i haven't gone over that yet... I've got to

 

 

 

A. redo face, adding forhead and making the eyes smaller (too big ai?)

 

 

 

B. redon the anatomy on the body a tad, initially i thought that yeah even though i had started out trying to make her leaning on somthing and then transitioned to a running gal... its just not going to fly :(

 

 

 

I belive that i'm going to make her leaning on a tree in a clearing instead of the bg that i have now... also make her head smaller as atm it looks like more than half her torso :?

IS look nice in my view, since am not a good artist :D

 

 

 

Overall, it look ok :)

 

 

 

~BOMB

She has no forehead. =\

 

Neither do I.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

image completey stolen from pixelation. lol.

i would make the bottom half of the face match the size of the top proportionally. if the bottom was bigger, i would probably lookm pretty good.