Chapter 1: And to you son of GrimdorÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ

 

 

 

The cleric stood upon the pyre and spoke the last will and testament of Lord Grendol; adventurer and explorer of the land of Gielinor. Young Ralin sat and listened to each word listening and hoping for his name as the cleric went through the list. He began to get annoyed as more and more interesting artefacts and gold were given away to people he had never even heard of, just as he was getting bored and impatient he heard the words ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅAnd to Ralin son of GrimdorÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

Critiscism please, before I write the next chapter I don't want to have made big mistakes on first chapter.

Paragraph changes whenever the subject changes.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

For example, when there is a new speaker or a different focus.

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