Just made this one... any comments etc?

 

Hey its good don't listen to what others say if you like it you like it,

 

thing is with are one guy will say that amazing the next will thing its pants.

 

 

 

So keep up the good work, do what you like not what others tell you to like

 

It happens far to much on this part of the forums \

Hey its good don't listen to what others say if you like it you like it,

 

thing is with are one guy will say that amazing the next will thing its pants.

 

 

 

So keep up the good work, do what you like not what others tell you to like

 

It happens far to much on this part of the forums \

 

 

 

Yeah thats real good advice right there mate, just tell him to ignore whatever someone says?

 

 

 

I'm sure that would get him a long ways.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyways, i'm trying to make sense of what you did here. I can tell that stream in the front is water that you possibly brushed/cloned around, and its on a gradient background.

 

 

 

Honestly at first look it doesn't look terrible but The red pillow objects and that stick figure thing throw it off.

 

 

 

The text is incredibly tacky, a glow and a bevel. Just for the record Bevels almost always will not do much good to text, and glow is ok if you use it in moderation and correctly.

 

 

 

 

 

I'm kind of interested in hearing what exactly you did here so I can possibly better help you out. I'm just shooting in the dark right now.

It's a stick figure since it's a game, I used a 3d-ish cut someone made, which was betetr than the cartoon that's actually in the game.

Oh so you're trying to kind of make a signature about the game perhaps?

 

 

 

Well take this as my advice but if the game is called line rider I don't think its a terribly complex looking game right? Scrape the whole idea of the weird brushing/water/whatever around and try to go for a bit more minmalistic feel like the game. Give it a bit more of a profesional look basicly.

He pasted this render onto a background adn then added the figure and the text, doesn't look like there's much work put into it.