Rate First Space Scene

[MeXe]

[tunaboy692004]

not bad, what progrm did yo use?

[MeXe]

100% adobe photoshop

[Nadril]

Told yah what i thought on msn, not bad at all (better than some trys i've seen for sure :lol: ) Looking forward to seeing what you can do with 'em :)

[MeXe]

Told yah what i thought on msn, not bad at all (better than some trys i've seen for sure :lol: ) Looking forward to seeing what you can do with 'em :)

 

 

 

yea i know, im working on a new one but i need ideas for what to do

[ice_ring]

that exploding planet look A LOT like a tutorial i saw by alyn on DA....:?

 

 

 

but if you did make it without the tutorial good job.

[Nadril]

that exploding planet look A LOT like a tutorial i saw by alyn on DA....:?

 

 

 

but if you did make it without the tutorial good job.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Space scenes are a hard thing to grasp, so its always a good thing to look at a tutoral at first.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and if you saying using them are no0b, well i used them when I started space, and sometimes if i'm currious about something i'll still read through one to get the general idea, and i seen to have learned from them.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And yes, they are tutorials off of alyn's page, i recomended them To him.

[ice_ring]

im not saying hes a noob for using them because i probably couldnt even get thru the tutorial :oops:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

im just saying that i recognized it and that he shouldnt take complete credit for it.

[KakashiX]

Hmm..few things I see that I know you can improve upon-

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

*Exploding planet's brightness needs to be shown upon the second planet as well. The other planet is too dark for being so close to something at that level of brightness. Show a light source using that.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

*Starfield looks a little awkward, the blue and the white dont look too well together. It looks kind of as if you messed up while colorizing the stars or something. Also, try to add a nebula, or some lensflares to make it look less empty.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

*Non-exploding planet really needs some work. It actually looks as if it's going inward rather than outward. Also it's too dark for the scene as said already. Try brightening it up some (control+m on ps7 would help add some brightness). Also add some atmosphere (outer/inner glows on the planet) (if you have, try to make it more visible cause it's a bit hard to see).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

There are a few other things, but I really can't give a thorough explaination. I understand it's your first scene, I am just trying to help you out a bit. Keep up the good work, I am sure you'll be making good scenes soon enough :).

[Nadril]

Hmm..few things I see that I know you can improve upon-

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

*Exploding planet's brightness needs to be shown upon the second planet as well. The other planet is too dark for being so close to something at that level of brightness. Show a light source using that.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

*Starfield looks a little awkward, the blue and the white dont look too well together. It looks kind of as if you messed up while colorizing the stars or something. Also, try to add a nebula, or some lensflares to make it look less empty.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

*Non-exploding planet really needs some work. It actually looks as if it's going inward rather than outward. Also it's too dark for the scene as said already. Try brightening it up some (control+m on ps7 would help add some brightness). Also add some atmosphere (outer/inner glows on the planet) (if you have, try to make it more visible cause it's a bit hard to see).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

There are a few other things, but I really can't give a thorough explaination. I understand it's your first scene, I am just trying to help you out a bit. Keep up the good work, I am sure you'll be making good scenes soon enough :).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Wheee :) Someone else is here to help with C&C :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And yeah, all of those are realy good points, i know i think i said a few of those things to him on msn :P