Engravings

[subtle_rune]

I checked my mobile phone. One missed call. I looked at who it was from; apparently it was from my own number. Why would I phone myself? Did I use it to send myself a memo? I pressed the ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¹ÃâListenÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ button and put the speaker to my ear. There was a short crackle. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅWhatever you do, donÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t go near the forest. DonÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t even think about investigating it. I am the person that has disappeared. IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢m stuck. If you go looking at the forest, so will you. Just stay away from the forest.ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

[archimage_a]

Great use of a fate based forth person narrative at the beginning, really set the scene. Although kind of obvouis, but might just be because of the number of times it was used before.

 

 

 

They looked at each other and called me crazy.

 

Might screw up the story but...

 

They looked at each other and called me a witch and tried to burn me at the stake.

 

Just seems a bit more realistic...but then again what do I know.

 

 

 

Sad ending but it complimented the rest of the story so over all it was pretty good.

[powerent]

Here's what I think will happen to the poor person. The guy is doomed to repeat the same fate, lost in a circle of time, never getting older or younger. He won't be dead or alive, he'll just...exist. Either that or, using the Quantum Physics Theory archimage_a gladly presented to us in his thread The Desiral Project, he jumps universes, leading to the same fate as before, but one thing is different with the Quantum Theory: There is the chance he will finally take heed his message, get killed somehow, or will just get stuck in the time-travel. It's Quantum, you never know.

[archimage_a]

Bravo Powerent.

 

A person could get stuck in a loop, as indicated by the Quantum Theory. But time around them would go on as normal(As though a car traverling sideways across a city, while all the other cars travel fowards.) and as such they would be crossing into many different dimentions. Each one being the same, but different, though equally possiblely the same(as though you may crash into one, or get through them all, or have an empty road, or find no road at all). Its all Possible.

 

So any one of those 3 and:

 

He gives up, he has a nice time and doesn't actually want to leave, anything really...