Sunwarriord Posted January 25, 2005 Share Posted January 25, 2005 i brushed a small part. around the edges mostley. 1-10 BG is going to be a dead iron dragon with dragon legs/iron bars/dragone bones and in the farther back just iron dragons. also adding shield and eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ran_Shadow2 Posted January 25, 2005 Share Posted January 25, 2005 uh im sorry but the linework is appauling :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunwarriord Posted January 25, 2005 Author Share Posted January 25, 2005 hmm appauling, gotta look that up. btw-2nd attempt at doing a person. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunwarriord Posted January 27, 2005 Author Share Posted January 27, 2005 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J_Rod_The_Ti Posted January 27, 2005 Share Posted January 27, 2005 uh im sorry but the linework is appauling :? I quite like it. 8/10 for what you have so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest j3k Posted January 27, 2005 Share Posted January 27, 2005 that big sample over the top of the better one stops me from getting the full feeling from it, its not like anyone wants to steal it :shock: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunwarriord Posted January 27, 2005 Author Share Posted January 27, 2005 were you being sarcastic or serious ^ ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_-HI-_ Posted January 27, 2005 Share Posted January 27, 2005 lol 8.8/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunwarriord Posted January 27, 2005 Author Share Posted January 27, 2005 thanks...can anyone get me a pic of what an anti fire breath shield looks like when wielded? like a pic of a character from the side wielding the shield? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neanderslave Posted January 27, 2005 Share Posted January 27, 2005 looking very very nice i am liking a lot cant wait to see the finished product so far 8/10!!!!! good work Neanderslave Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Despaxes Posted January 27, 2005 Share Posted January 27, 2005 very good :D thanks everyone for the sigs! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crimsonking Posted January 27, 2005 Share Posted January 27, 2005 Nice 9/10 ~^v^~Ex-Leader of the Divine Flames of Redemption~^v^~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunwarriord Posted January 27, 2005 Author Share Posted January 27, 2005 almost done with it. 95% done. Just have to add the symbol on shield and shade. And any other adjustments he wants. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brammy7 Posted January 27, 2005 Share Posted January 27, 2005 Looks rushed and not very well thought out 4/10 DeviantARt - http://brammy7.deviantart.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunwarriord Posted January 27, 2005 Author Share Posted January 27, 2005 Lagged. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neanderslave Posted January 27, 2005 Share Posted January 27, 2005 looking good i know other people dont like it but i like it a lot maybe make the eyes a bit brighter?? Neanderslave Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaguar_Kings Posted January 28, 2005 Share Posted January 28, 2005 black eyes should be done white/whatever just not black. And I think it's pretty awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunwarriord Posted January 28, 2005 Author Share Posted January 28, 2005 about 99.9% done. Just waiting too see if he likes it the way it is or if he wanted any changes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunwarriord Posted January 29, 2005 Author Share Posted January 29, 2005 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dyronamics Posted January 29, 2005 Share Posted January 29, 2005 You shouldnt have the same number of bumpings as postings on a post :P Anyway, I think it could be improved some more: - Dragon in the background looks like its been stuffed - in a position wgich doesnt imply any movement or emotion, try turning its head slightly to look at you and give it some eyes to glare at you. - Dragon shield looks very odd with what I assume to be slash-marks in it, Slash marks on the curve of a shield like that are pretty hard to make realistic.... if you want to show damage to it then put it on the leading edge of the shield with ragged edges. Or if you want the guy to look more impressive and 'invulnerable' then dont show any damage. - Skirt seems to bulge out unnaturally from around the guy's hips, tone that down a little and remove the red things on the front of it, there isnt enough of them to see what they are so they look strange. - A big X for the eye? You can do better than that. A big red tinged eye with the eyelid almost fully closed but still possible to see a little of the pupil. Maybe scarring on the skin to emphasise that its dead too. - The cannon (I can only assume its a cannon) blocks quite a lot of the dragon I think, moving it a little back might help improve the view of the dragon. - Take the shading off the top of the dragons snout, there cant be shadows above and below it at the same time. Hope this lot helps :) Superknight/Blademaster: Level 150; Hps: 132Theoretical damage per round: 234Highest recorded damage in one round: 104 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Despaxes Posted January 29, 2005 Share Posted January 29, 2005 your 'cannon' is dragon legs lol...and i agree the break in the shield doent look very good thanks everyone for the sigs! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest FunkyJunk9000 Posted January 29, 2005 Share Posted January 29, 2005 very nice 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bmagic Posted January 29, 2005 Share Posted January 29, 2005 very nice but why do u have a skirt?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Despaxes Posted January 29, 2005 Share Posted January 29, 2005 that might be what the person ordered? eh? thanks everyone for the sigs! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dyronamics Posted January 29, 2005 Share Posted January 29, 2005 your 'cannon' is dragon legs lol...and i agree the break in the shield doent look very good aah... shading of both legs might be a good idea then instead of having a gradient across it Superknight/Blademaster: Level 150; Hps: 132Theoretical damage per round: 234Highest recorded damage in one round: 104 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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