i brushed a small part. around the edges mostley.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1-10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

BG is going to be a dead iron dragon with dragon legs/iron bars/dragone bones and in the farther back just iron dragons.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

also adding shield and eyes.

uh im sorry but the linework is appauling :?

hmm appauling, gotta look that up.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

btw-2nd attempt at doing a person.

bump

uh im sorry but the linework is appauling :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I quite like it. 8/10 for what you have so far.

that big sample over the top of the better one stops me from getting the full feeling from it, its not like anyone wants to steal it :shock:

were you being sarcastic or serious ^

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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lol

 

 

 

8.8/10 :D

thanks...can anyone get me a pic of what an anti fire breath shield looks like when wielded?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

like a pic of a character from the side wielding the shield?

looking very very nice i am liking a lot cant wait to see the finished product so far 8/10!!!!! good work

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Neanderslave

very good :D

Nice 9/10

almost done with it. 95% done. Just have to add the symbol on shield and shade. And any other adjustments he wants.

Looks rushed and not very well thought out

 

 

 

4/10

Lagged.

looking good i know other people dont like it but i like it a lot maybe make the eyes a bit brighter??

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Neanderslave

black eyes should be done white/whatever just not black.

 

 

 

And I think it's pretty awesome.

about 99.9% done. Just waiting too see if he likes it the way it is or if he wanted any changes.

bump

You shouldnt have the same number of bumpings as postings on a post :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway, I think it could be improved some more:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Dragon in the background looks like its been stuffed - in a position wgich doesnt imply any movement or emotion, try turning its head slightly to look at you and give it some eyes to glare at you.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Dragon shield looks very odd with what I assume to be slash-marks in it, Slash marks on the curve of a shield like that are pretty hard to make realistic.... if you want to show damage to it then put it on the leading edge of the shield with ragged edges. Or if you want the guy to look more impressive and 'invulnerable' then dont show any damage.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Skirt seems to bulge out unnaturally from around the guy's hips, tone that down a little and remove the red things on the front of it, there isnt enough of them to see what they are so they look strange.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- A big X for the eye? You can do better than that. A big red tinged eye with the eyelid almost fully closed but still possible to see a little of the pupil. Maybe scarring on the skin to emphasise that its dead too.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The cannon (I can only assume its a cannon) blocks quite a lot of the dragon I think, moving it a little back might help improve the view of the dragon.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Take the shading off the top of the dragons snout, there cant be shadows above and below it at the same time.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hope this lot helps :)

your 'cannon' is dragon legs lol...and i agree the break in the shield doent look very good

very nice 9/10

very nice

 

 

 

but why do u have a skirt??

that might be what the person ordered? eh?

your 'cannon' is dragon legs lol...and i agree the break in the shield doent look very good

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

aah...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

shading of both legs might be a good idea then instead of having a gradient across it