Humble begginings

[tankcmy]

maybe we could try making a movie from this story :D

[sirith_knight]

Good to be back, I guess more people than just me are posting now. Story is getting better.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Making a guess here, but I'd say you are using wordpad to write this. You should look into to getting a word processor if you really enjoy writing. I'm sure someone you know has a microsoft works disc. I see some words spelled wrong that shouldn't be, and a word processor would fix that. Your writing is good but it get so much better with a little help from the computer, (It's also pretty fun to do the word count to see how long it is, or maybe that is just me :P )

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Looking forward to the next part. (Best archer in the game is a noob, makes me sick, bah! :D )

[barfbag]

Whoa, a week of nothing then BAM! Everyone replies. holy crap..... :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Zenith grabbed his bow and quiver and ran over to the middle of falador, Alexis folowing. It looked as if hell had risen from the ground. Black and white armered bodies littered the ground, some worriors missing limbs, but still fighting.Alexis came running up, panting. "Zenith, I cant run fast, these boots havent broken in yet!" Zenith sighed. He looked around, scanning across windows. He looked and saw a perfect spot. "Alexis, I'm heading up to that window!" He said. "I'm going to snipe from up there." Alexis seemed puzzled. "Snipe?" She said, scratching her head. "Shoot people in stratagetic bodyparts from where they can't reach, by use of projectile." Zenith said, running up to the door of the general store. Alexis looked, scrattched her head, then took out her sword and started slashing apart black knights.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Zenith climbed the ladder to the window. He took out his bow, and aimed at a black knight. It was hard to get good shots because of all the moving targets. He flung a flurry of arrows at some black knights, all going through the head. Sir Van looked up at him and shouted "Great work! we're winning! Keep doin what you'r doin!" Zenith smiled and launched another flurry of arrows. One hit a fellow knight, but most hit their target. Zenith heard a screem, and so did the black knights. "RETREAT!" 'We've won...we've won' Zenith thought as he walked down through the general store door. Alexis was waiting. "Nice shot!!" Alexis said as they walked over to Sir Van.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ok, I gotta go to bed, wright more L8R. PS: Thanks for the compliments!

[MetalMulishaFMX]

more please 8) o and by the way good work :D

[barfbag]

"Great shot, Zenith! Alexis, you're skills were quite impressive as well." Sir Van said as Zenith and Alexis walked up to him. "Thanks!" Alexis said, sheathing her sword. "So, are they coming back?" Zenith said. "Of course, just not very soon." Sir Van said, cluckling. "Well, we better get back to the house, I havent got done getting the scuff off my high heel. " Alexis said, Zenith pounding his head against the general store's wall. "Comon, Zenith, lets go!" Alexis said, dragging Zenith back to the house by his ear. Sir Van just chuckled.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Back at the house, Zenith too off his armer and hung his bow on the wall, While Alexis was reading tyhe book 'legend of the virus'. "Zenith, did you know that mosters once were controled by a virus and the had to get ANDREW, the most powerfull mage ever to help stop them?" Alexis said, Zenith turning to face her. "Ya, Van and Mimi stopped it I think." Zenith said, him sitting down on the bed. "Don't know, theres a second sequal coming out by a different wrighter..." Alexis said. Just then, a note was slipped under the door. Zenith picked it up. Wonder what it says? Zenith and Alexis said.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

OK, done for now. Oh, and If you didn't know, Legend of the virus is my old story, now being written by devilkiller. :D

[barfbag]

Alright, I'm back, so I'll wright more.....*yawns* I'm tired so it'l be quick.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

"I have Kaoru, meet me in Dranor manor, top floor, Zenith and Alexis. Come alone...." Zenith read aloud, alexis staring in dis-belief. "How....But she's....". Alexis's voice trailled off as tears started welling up in her eyes. "Meet me in 2 days." Zenith continued, anger growing in his voice. "Don't worry, Alexis. Tomarro we'll go get some lobsters from karajima and some better..." "DON"T WORRY?!?!" Alexis budded in. "You dont know what he oculd be doing to her right now!!" Alexis strted crying. Zenith looked into her eyes. "I won't let ANYTHING happen to her. Remember, We have 2 days to prepare. Now go to bed and rest up." Zenith said as he slid into bed beside her.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The next morning, Zenith woke up, seeing Alexis changing into her red skirt, with a black and silver top. He sat up and yawned. "Morning, Zenith!" Alexis said as she grabbed her addy long sword. Zenith put on a shirt, jeand and slid on his leather armer. He grabbed his quiver, arrows and bow. "Lets get going to karajima." Zenith said as they walked out the door. The boatride was great. They landed on karajima and walked to the fishing dock. They fished untill full of lobsters and left. once back at the house, they suited up and started the walk to dranor. They made it there by the next day. "Ready?" Zenith said. "Defenatly." She said. They walked up to the room and stepped inside. Kaoru was tied up in the corner of the room. Alexis looked at the figure standing beside her and gasped. The only thing she could say was "Oh...My...God...."

[Origin]

Holy crap. So exiting :D can't wait

[barfbag]

Alexis clenched her fists as tears came out of her eyes. "You B@$+3rd!" She said as she lunged at him. He dodged her first swing but was nipped in the arm by the second. "Long time no see, Alexis." he said with a smirk. he reached for a staff at the side of the room but an arrow sliced his hand and flew towards kaoru. "No!" Alexis said, but zenith just smiled. The arrow sliced off the rope bounding Kaoru. She stood up and grabbed the man's staff. She uttered un-recognisable words and as soon as she finished, a ball of light flew at the man and sent him flying into the oppostte wall. "Never come back again, Zach!" screemed Alexis and Kaoru togeather. Zach grabbed a stick lyuing on the ground and busted the window. He stood infront of it and said "Don't worry, I'll find you yet....." He smirked. A gust of wind blew the curtain infront of him. The curtain receded leaving no trace of him ever being there.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

"Who was that Zach guy?" Zenith said, confused at the outpour of emotions. "He killed our parents, that...." Alexis said, choking back tears. "He was hired to kill our parents and us, but we escaped. He never missed a bounty before that. Now he has venged to kill us." Kaoru said, walking over to confort Alexis. "I...I had no clue. Alexis, why dodnt you tell me?" Zenith said, walking over to her. "It would have put you in too mutch danger." Alexis said as zenith hugged her. "Now I'll kill him for threataning your lives." He said as opened the door to find a wall of fire. "Man, he's crafty." Zenith said. "Jump out the window!" Zenith said. Kauru jumped and landed fine. Alexis jumped and landed beside Kaoru. Then it was Zenith's turn. He jumped. As soon as he jumped, he knew somthing was wromg. He turned his head to see a fire strike heading straight for him. "NOOO!" He screamed, facing certain death.