Romulus8604 Posted February 3, 2005 Share Posted February 3, 2005 Alright, I've seen poems, short stories and other literary works here. I must admit I didn't fully take the time to look everything over. I have work to go to in four hours. So I will make my first post that of a song I have written. I gave description as to how each verse and chorus is meant to be heard. Drawing 1st verse-soft pleading whimper. I donÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t know what to do with my self. I just wanna tear down your health. Why donÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t you ever give up and melt. Am I always hurt by what youÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ve dealt? ThereÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s things in this world I canÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t take. Never helping not even for your own sake. ~chorus~ lines 1 and 3 soft loud lines 2 and 4 screamed. I feel like IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢m gonna kill some one IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢m tired of these lies When I kill ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ you ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ll only be happy when youÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢re covered in flies When I kill ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ you ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ 2nd verse-soft pleading whimper. I try to scratch away at my ears. I donÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t wanna listen, but itÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s all to clear. Controlling what I thought was numb. My cures is a needle away I want some. Contorting my views twisting my thoughts. If I donÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t get my love this blood will clot. ~chorus~ lines 1 and 3 soft and loud lines 2 and 4 screamed. I feel like IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢m gonna kill some one IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢m tired of these lies When I kill ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ you ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ll only be happy when youÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢re covered in flies When I kill ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ you ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ 3rd verse-harsh loud whisper last line screamed. I wonÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t give up until IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢m dead. All I hear is you inside my head. Nails scratching through the bed. All I hear is you inside my head. Pounding fists into lead. All I hear is you inside my head. But all I want is my med! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeberon Posted February 3, 2005 Share Posted February 3, 2005 Its a bit weird but its ok.... :shock: It doesent all have to ryhme..... and whats with all the death stuff? :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Romulus8604 Posted February 3, 2005 Author Share Posted February 3, 2005 I am a little morbid I suppose. Rhyming is something I do a lot it helps me concentrate and stay on task. It's not something I always do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axeraider70 Posted February 3, 2005 Share Posted February 3, 2005 Read the first few lines and it reminds me of evenescense... axeraider70.deviantART.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Romulus8604 Posted February 3, 2005 Author Share Posted February 3, 2005 Ouch. That actually hurt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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