February 3, 200521 yr Alright, I've seen poems, short stories and other literary works here. I must admit I didn't fully take the time to look everything over. I have work to go to in four hours. So I will make my first post that of a song I have written. I gave description as to how each verse and chorus is meant to be heard. Drawing 1st verse-soft pleading whimper. I donÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t know what to do with my self. I just wanna tear down your health. Why donÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t you ever give up and melt. Am I always hurt by what youÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ve dealt? ThereÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s things in this world I canÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t take. Never helping not even for your own sake. ~chorus~ lines 1 and 3 soft loud lines 2 and 4 screamed. I feel like IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢m gonna kill some one IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢m tired of these lies When I kill ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ you ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ll only be happy when youÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢re covered in flies When I kill ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ you ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ 2nd verse-soft pleading whimper. I try to scratch away at my ears. I donÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t wanna listen, but itÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s all to clear. Controlling what I thought was numb. My cures is a needle away I want some. Contorting my views twisting my thoughts. If I donÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t get my love this blood will clot. ~chorus~ lines 1 and 3 soft and loud lines 2 and 4 screamed. I feel like IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢m gonna kill some one IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢m tired of these lies When I kill ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ you ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ll only be happy when youÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢re covered in flies When I kill ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ you ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ 3rd verse-harsh loud whisper last line screamed. I wonÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t give up until IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢m dead. All I hear is you inside my head. Nails scratching through the bed. All I hear is you inside my head. Pounding fists into lead. All I hear is you inside my head. But all I want is my med!
February 3, 200521 yr Its a bit weird but its ok.... :shock: It doesent all have to ryhme..... and whats with all the death stuff? :?
February 3, 200521 yr Author I am a little morbid I suppose. Rhyming is something I do a lot it helps me concentrate and stay on task. It's not something I always do.
February 3, 200521 yr Read the first few lines and it reminds me of evenescense... axeraider70.deviantART.com
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