hey, if that other guy doesnt want the cash, ill take it

 

 

 

 

 

 

:lol:

hey, if that other guy doesnt want the cash, ill take it

 

 

 

 

 

 

:lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You missed a few spots :lol: :roll:

i left the sample...but yea, i forgot to add text

i like the color for jlrs... orange is sweet

I can still see where the name was too.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

btw, mines almost done.

 

 

 

there, now it says hai and i can do summore tutchups and remove sample as well 8)

lol make your own :-P btw im back i was doing my homework :( then hurry up wit it :P

Lol, i give up. It was all going well,.... untill Terragen decided to start acting like a compleate [developmentally delayed] :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

look at this lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ok... Terragen realy is making me mad lol :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

So yeah, Congratz to the winners and what not :lol:

 

 

 

or i could just use my horrible one x.x

ummmm so sad if only kakashi looked at this :(

Alright, I'll sell you it, went to do homework/take a nap so I couldn't reply that fast :P.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Kb, next time try to put variation in the water, cause the clone job is pretty crappy :P, plus, you screwed the quality up.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Do you want me to put Iamannoyed in smaller letters somewhere else? Cause having such a small name will make it easier to rip as shown by Kb.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

RSN is Kakashi X4

OK HERES MY ENTRY:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I added a little animation for extra emphasis.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(Bryce and Photoshop/Image Ready)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

"ITS OVER?" JESUS, I HAVE A TENDANCY TO ENTER LATE ON THE CONTESTS lol.... THIS IS MY 2nd LATE ENTRY. OH WELL

Entry Revoked.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sorry,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Jlr

hehe, lol, spent waaaay too much time for this but oh well, b4 u pay him, look at this

 

 

 

hehe, lol, spent waaaay too much time for this but oh well, b4 u pay him, look at this

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Mind if i give you some C&C? If not, oh well :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- There is no surface map at all on it. If there is, you can't see it. And a surface map is something you want to see.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The pure black shadows and then the grey ones on the terrain look highly unrealistic, and just not good.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The scene looks like it just gets cut off almost, neart he end of the right back side. I know that the Free version of terragen isn't very good at ocean scenes (because of limited terrain space), but still, work with what you have.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The atmosphere is quite basic, i also don't know if i agree with the peachy haze color and then the bright orange sun. I would think there wiould be a more Orangish feel to the scene.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The text needs alot of work. At the least make it match the peachy like color of the sky, i'm guessing your using paint for text.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Add a boarder around it. Just go around with a 1 or 2px pencil and draw a line (aka a boarder) on all 4 sides :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- And finaly, ITS TOO BIG max sizes here are 300x150x30,000bytes, and yours is 400x125. So shorten it by 100 pixels wide.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

So... There you go, not even my topic and i'm giving C&C :lol:

hey i like urs too well who ever gets on first i buy first rsn iamannoyed

 

 

 

Btw in bottom right put Hai and if u want u can put iamannoyed somewhere small in there that blends in

lol nm this is waaay past due :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops:

ye can any of u 2 like respond?