well it didnt take long but i wanted to do one soo... a rate would be nice also =p

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

nice, 8/10

 

 

 

hey, when i do terregen it come up all choppy and looks weird, how do i fix that?

nice, 8/10

 

 

 

hey, when i do terregen it come up all choppy and looks weird, how do i fix that?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Change quality/detail/whatever it was called.

I like it, i think i seen a similar 1 b4 tho...

ok ty

 

 

 

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ok ty

 

 

 

(WAAAAAAAAY OFF SUBJECT{whats it mean when some1 says BUMP?})

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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bumpage

Its not bad, but not good by all means either.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Surface map is kind of simplistic. Just grass and grey.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-The terrain i don't have a problem with, because you have the sun set up the atmosphere seems a bit Too bright, it takes away more than it adds realy.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The water is very basic. I would personaly choose more smooth water, perhaps have a bit of a beach heading up to the water as well. Right now its way too choppy for just a little pond.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The ray's affect you have is nice, but isn't realy used too its "full" potental.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Its a bit small too. Perhaps at least do a 500x500 render or so next time?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Theres my C&C... yeah.

8/10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i think its great it would be a lot better if the was less flare from the light source

Its not bad, but not good by all means either.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Surface map is kind of simplistic. Just grass and grey.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-The terrain i don't have a problem with, because you have the sun set up the atmosphere seems a bit Too bright, it takes away more than it adds realy.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The water is very basic. I would personaly choose more smooth water, perhaps have a bit of a beach heading up to the water as well. Right now its way too choppy for just a little pond.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The ray's affect you have is nice, but isn't realy used too its "full" potental.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Its a bit small too. Perhaps at least do a 500x500 render or so next time?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Theres my C&C... yeah.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

yes its just grass and grey ( i just threw this thing together didnt have much time to do it but not enuf time to do anything else)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the water... u dont see it but thats just like an ocean (only because you dont see it all)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

im still a newb with the rays just practicing really

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and the render is default... just photobucket sized it down =p

bump

 

Its not bad, but not good by all means either.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Surface map is kind of simplistic. Just grass and grey.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-The terrain i don't have a problem with, because you have the sun set up the atmosphere seems a bit Too bright, it takes away more than it adds realy.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The water is very basic. I would personaly choose more smooth water, perhaps have a bit of a beach heading up to the water as well. Right now its way too choppy for just a little pond.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The ray's affect you have is nice, but isn't realy used too its "full" potental.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Its a bit small too. Perhaps at least do a 500x500 render or so next time?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Theres my C&C... yeah.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

yes its just grass and grey ( i just threw this thing together didnt have much time to do it but not enuf time to do anything else)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the water... u dont see it but thats just like an ocean (only because you dont see it all)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

im still a newb with the rays just practicing really

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and the render is default... just photobucket sized it down =p

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

First off, don't use the "i just did it quick excuse" i don't care if you did it in 5mins or 5 hours :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also, The water i realy don't think when surounded almost like that (almost like a gulf) would be that choppy, maybe when it was a windy or rainy day outside, but not in a clear morning. Either way, it throws the render off.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

As for your new one theres a LOT of problems with it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

First off, i hate how on the right it just cuts off all of the sudden. Its like Land...land....NOTHING. Its a realy dramastic change and doesn't look good.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The surface map again, is basic. Just a snow color and a grass color.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also, the water i could say is a bit too reflective, and if you wanted it to be reflective than don't have it so the reflection gose right under it. it looks realy weird and unrealistic.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The sky is also preaty basic, nighttime kind of sky. I like how you tried doing something like a moon, but i would make the sun smaller if you wanted to call it a "moon"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and that little triangle island off in the distance is realy odd too. It might have been alright if you had some more mountains way back there, but right now.. its jus this little triangle out in the ocean, it doesn't realy server any "purpose" in the peice.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I like this one, but the water is to rough, it should be a little smoother.

its ice =p

more contrast??

 

 

 

looks foggy

 

 

 

not in a good way

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

nice though :)